Aw I liked this. Thank you for sharing!

Wow. Beautiful story. On point and very sweet

EXCUSE ME IM CRYING the way you portrayed this history is heartwarming I feel so much affection while reading this and im sorry if there is grammatical mistakes this isnt my first language and I suck at leaving reviews but this fanfiction right here was so enyojable and I really feel the need to say it to you because it really made my day happier thank you so much

Wow, great job with this sweet idea! Toph's voice here is spot on and I love thinking about these two characters bonding.

Very nice. Were you going to write more to this? If not, it stands beautifully on it's own, but I'd love to see maybe another chapter or two, maybe between Zuko and the team, or Zuko reminecing on when Iroh helped to heal his scar. A chapter of what Zuko is thinking during Southern Raiders would be a cool idea too. But really, this story is short and sweet. I enjoyed it. :)

Beatiful