Please keep writing

okay so I thought I was being ridiculous for thinking the girl was Olivia all along but now I'm not sure it was so ridiculous after all, especially knowing what the title means. has six months indoors made me lose my remaining marbles or was that Olivia's spirit or vital force or something?

I finally am getting with this story. Not that I could ever not love any of your writing but I was so committed to your others on here that I didn’t appreciate the slow burn of this til I re read it tonight. Please update it’s beautiful and we’re finally getting somewhere. Love your writing!

What a chapter...I was in the edge of my seat the whole time...who is the girl?

Firstly, add me to the "Outside of" crew. I can only handle one of these heart-wrenching, unfinished fics at a time, and this is my chosen one.

"That starts a slow, brutal burn in me..." "I've ruined someone too..." "I want to do it." "It's as if my own deep emptiness has had too much time to grow in her." and on and on and on. I am being mindfucked if it's not her. "I'm okay." LIKE HELL YOU ARE? eh? eeeh?

Also, really got me with those literary references 3

Lastly, from the fandom to the writers: IT'S OBSCENELY DECADENT TO THROW THIS THING BETWEEN THEM AWAY.

Okay wow. Wow. Okay. Yeah. I'm alright. I'm good. I'm not out of breath from crying or anything. I literally can't think of any words to say to you because you literally own them. You own every word in the english language. You conquered it. Everything the light touches is yours, because you're the queen. I have never seen anything like this story ever and it's the most beautiful thing. Thank you so much for updating thisssss!

Lovely work.

Letting the projection of Olivia exact promises for now-Olivia...and for now-Elliot.

Well done.

This story is just... well... amazing! To me it seems Elliot is communicating with Olivia as a child. The child who felt invisible and unloved, who now is finding strength and love from Elliot. He came back to her and she feels seen and worthy. Beautiful writing :)

WOW

SHES ALIVE! Thank you lyric! You are now allowed to call yourself nice! Hahaha. Thanks for the shoutout :)
I also love the theme throughout this about Elliot being a protector and making them feel safe. So so true. Looking forward to the next chapter where we see his reaction when she wakes up :)

Your writing is a piece of art! I think you are the best writer on fanfic hand down! Please don't keep me waiting too long for more. It really doesn't which story you update. I am enthralled in them all.

please more

Oh my goodness, you are truly a gift of god.
It felt like I’m with them in that ICU room. And the girl, sometimes I think it’s the spirit of young Olivia and sometimes I think it’s their future daughter and sometimes I think it is Out of body Olivia...
Thank you for this

This chapter is heartbreakingly beautifully haunting. I absolutely love your writing and the way this is playing out and the songs you have referenced could not be more perfect.

Wow, how amazing! I love this story, Elliot met Olivia’s life force, her spirit, her soul! Beautiful! Thank you so much, you are an amazing writer with true talent!