Good work so far!

I can't log in rn but I just had to read this when I saw there was an update!
Lol Sam and Patrick are the most sibling siblings to ever sibling I love this positive representation!
Oml and I'm never getting tired of that "right behind you jackass" line
Sawyer don't be insinuating shit about her brother like that does this look like some white people shit to you do they look like Boone and Shannon

Good story! I love Sawyer Oc, is so cute!

your writing is fucking amazing!

Ok I adore Sam already
And I might possibly ship her and Sawyer already

I wish your OC had a more distinctive voice. I mean, being able to look through her eyes. Her feelings matter. She doesn't need to be in every big scene, maybe she can't do anything, but we'll care more about her (and about her brother?)
The cast of the show is huge and it's hard to make a new female character work. Yet, it's hard to find a Lost OC fic, the plotline is so complex and it's really hard to insert an OC without ruining the original connections and relationships. Anyway, I appreciate the effort and I encourage you to keep going.