Dude, this is like something straight out of Tales from the Crypt or Stephen King. What else do you have in mind? This stuff is great and hope to read more. - THXXX11138

It may be fifteen after midnight for me, but it doesn't matter.

This is pretty awesome.

"What's wrong with me mama?"

"Nothing baby, you're just ugly."

I like the horror genre, butI admit that at first I picked this story because I thought this would have been a quick read. And because original context is not common on this site.

While the story itself is short, the reading felt more potent than I expected. For what it's worth coming from me, I found the suspence building well done.

I feel a little of Stephen King in the story. Maybe some Lovecraft too. Mainly due to the contemporary setting and the little context offered without any explanation or reason.

Is this a oneshot or is it part of a bigger work? I'd gladly read more in both cases.