I hope Chomper will find the killer without getting caught. I like this story and I believe you're doing great.

Fascinating and tragic story. Please update soon.

I think this chapter was precisely exquisite. I professionally write stories and this made me stop in my tracks and read it, lovely your story, 11 out of 10

THAT WAS SAD BUT I HOPE CHOMPER AND THE GANGE FIND LITTLEFOOTS KILLER

Oh man I can't believe Littlefoot is dead and Chomper is getting the blame for this , I mean Grandpa Longneck could've asked Chomper to sniff the scent of the killer. Now I can't see wait to see Bron, Shorty, and Ali's reactions when they found out what happened to Littlefoot.

Chomper is my favorite character and I hope he'll sniff and track down the killer who murdered Littlefoot.

Well to answer your question about that Ruby and Hyp part, it kinda seem a little different and I know that I read plenty of LBT fan stories about Chomper and Ruby being that close together like siblings or more than just friends, but its your story and I'm still enjoying it.

Insteresting so far but i don't really like when main characters died or are dead in the beginning of a story without a serious reason like for exemple here being Littlefoot dying to a random Sharpteeth so far, i could be wrong but for me it is either Red Claw which he isn't a 'treat' in the canon lore or it is the Sharptooth from the first film which again is dead in the canon lore too so he needs a good reason to be alive still, what my main issue is that you killed the main protagonist without doing a big battle which he won but for because of is wounds he died or something else with the same impact and 90% of the time a loop hole happened to let them be alive in the end, i should know because i did the same in my story for the Land Before Time which is a crossover with my favorite video games séries Dragon Quest which is complete but i still need to do updates on it since there is some grammar errors on it because english is not my first language, i'm still going to follow this story because it seems interesting to me and i hope you read my story as well

Hey I love reading LBT fanfictions and since you said you're new here, I believe you're gonna do great.

Not a bad start, could definitely use some more descriptions, occasional spelling checks, a bit of a slower pace might also help keep things from moving too quickly and allow more time for characters to grow and react