I thought this was really great. You got the MK characters really well here, and it’s nice to see a fic where they first meet. I personally like Jade and Kotal as a couple. They both need love. Really enjoyed the fight scene too. It was written great. Whether you leave it as a one shot or continue it, I think you got something great here regardless. Great work! :)

So yeah, I found this story and. Well, well, well. It's a surprise you actually did this story, a Mrtal Kobat story of all things! But it kinda isn't now that I look at the stories you do and I can understand. It isn't wrong to widen what franchises you can write stories about. But to tell you the truth, I heavily dislike pairings. Now that doesn't mean this story is bad, is just pairings in general that aren't what is cannon or in general isn't what I like. In fact, I will take a franchise that I'm trying to get into: Sonic. It is the example of dreadful pairings. Also, (please don't read stories that solly rely on pairings as the only main plot.) So yeah, if you want you can write them I'm not stopping you, but I most likely won't read them. (That is if they are franchises that I have no clue about there pairings, then maybe.) I can care less about those pairings. And also, if someone does flame you, (and they might, and not to sound cleche) but just ignore them. You don't have to worry what they say, if they think someones work is trash, then yeah, that's what they think, don't stress about it. Kay? Cool! Now this.. comment has gone on for to long. Seriously, they turn out like 1 and a half paragraphs long jeeze! So yeah, if you want, work on this story if you want, but try focusing one story then one you got time, do the other. That's would Batman would do, right. Kay, later, matey, not foreshadowing at all, har har har HAHAHAHAAHAHAHA HAHAHAAAA! Kay, I'll go.