Nice idea and very interesting chapter, so far. :)

Maybe give Seiyru a cruse mark? Since this makes him no only connected to Jiraiya and Tsunade, but also to Orochimaru. Make Seiyru master his curse mark, since the curse mark is such a cool ability! Maybe make him similar to Sasukes Juin form because Seiyru could get the Curse Mark of Heaven because it's the strongest and Sasukes Juin form looks amazing.

Also, maybe give Seiyru the slug contract? I mean, if you plan to give him the toad contract, it would be cool if he has the slug one. I would say... get him partnered up with Katsuyu or her mom or sister (A mother or sister were never mentioned, but just make them look like Katsuyu, I guess. :)

If you plan to give him or also give him the toad contract... give him Gamatatsu because he is second son of Gamabuntaand brother of Gamikichi and also not really used much. Maybe make Shima his mentor? Because her husband Fukasaku is Naruto and this would make a nice parallel! 3

Another question... do you already have pairings in mind? Or a small harem, since Seiyru is surely going to be in this clan rebuilding thing and that forces him to pick wives? I mean, Ayame is already flirted with. :3

If so... would you like suggestions? :)

I look forward to the next chapter. 3

This is a great chapter. The humour is priceless with everyone’s reactions to Seiyru being a Senju, especially when the Hokage explained everything to the council. Will Seiyru meet Naruto in the next chapter?

ok no CRA bullshit yeah

Great chapter hope the next chapter is soon

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

If Seiryu replaced Naruto, what happened to Kurama?

He's not staying in the Senju estate?

Im interested to see how this will play out

Oh dear the problems with drinking strong sake~!
Is there no Naruto in this fanfic?
Seiryu is gonna have so many problems with people fawning over him...
But the council's reactions were so much fun to read! It's wonderful!
Best of luck out there!

has your oc replaced naruto

I like your story so far, I hope to see what happens

Is Seiyru going to replace Naruto in the story?
I'm asking because you replace the protagonist with your OC in your other stories.

This is great start to the story. Seiyru sounds like a cool character. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

A SI wank of the author . Pathetic .

Alright good starting chapter I like Seiryu a lot already and glad that you’ve made him strong which is very fitting considering what he is aiming to become

Glad you hinted towards him being genuinely charming unlike Jiraiya which I’m sure both fills his father with envy and pride haha

Hope Seiryu quickly establishes himself as strong than anyone in the Konaha 11

Hope Seiryu gets a harem with Hinata, Ino, Sakura, Temari, Samui, Kurosuchi, Mei