Looks interesting gonna tag along to see where this goes so Luffy's df is not like enel's df the only question I want to ask is. Is Luffy's df a logia-type if you are going to explain his devil fruit in the future then don't spoil me

Good shit sir ,I hate Morgan so much ,I’m glad his bitch ass was fried, Zoro is going to have to work his ass off to get anywhere near Luffy ,but we know he will ,eventually. I wonder if there is anything Luffy can teach the crew ,I think Garp will have fun chasing Luffy’s trail of freedom and liberation too ,that is gonna be fun to read .cant wait to read on

Interesting story you are making, hope to read how they will do in the future soon!

So far the Story is really interesting and I'm looking forward to more, but I'm slightly confused... Did you erase the scene with Nami being on Alvidas boat on purpose, like is she going to meet luffy and the others later or did you just not write it into the Story?

while this is a really good story that has a lot of potential to be really good, the only thing I disagree with is luffy's bounty because if you look at most of the yonko commanders, their bounties are 500 million plus so I think luffys bounty should be around 500ish million as bounties don't mean strength completely for example if you look at robin, she had a high bounty as kid but that doesn't mean she is strong and also bounties are about how much of a threat you are and I think luffy just being a former yonko commander should have a higher bounty as I mentioned somewhere in the 500 million or even 400ish million is also an appropriate bounty for just the position he had. Either way Im really enjoying this story and I have faith that it might become really good. PS. when you reach wano I think you will enjoy it very much as the arc currently in the manga and the anime is amazing

A great chapter as always. It’s a good thing that you clarified the whole devil fruit thing because Luffy’s devil fruit is similar yet very different to the Goro Goro and it confused me a bit. That being said, I’m really curious to see what you’ve planned for the devil fruit because he’s clearly an electricity based paramecia who can use electricity or the electromagnetic field generates by his electricity yet he can also stretch his arm in a manner that reminds me of a Logia.

The story has been fun thus far and I enjoyed the banter between Zoro and Luffy. Those two are my favourite straw hats and have always been shown to have a slightly different relationship. All the straw hats are equals but I always felt that those two shared an understanding and a similar nature. I’ve often said that Zoro is the shadow king just like Roger and his first mate. In fact, Zoro’s strength speaks wonders for Luffy because it means that Luffy was able to get someone that strong to join his crew. I hope that Zoro trains up fast in your story because one of the things I appreciate the most about Zoro is how he demands standards from Luffy otherwise he will leave or fight Luffy. That closeness in strength helps define their dynamic.

Anyway I can’t wait to see the next chapter. I’m sure it’ll be great. You’re a good author so I trust you to follow the story and still be able to show your own unique story as opposed to a slightly different rehash (I just read two such stories and I’m salty XD).

I was really happy to see this story, though I waited a few days to review. I've never found very many interesting one piece fanfictions, and this looks like it could be a good one. I like the different take with giving Luffy a realistic reason to be more experienced and mature, with him having been a commander of Shanks pirate crew. My only real nitpick is the spelling of Luffy's fruit as I got confused when I googled it to make sure it was Enel's, but I saw another review already mention that. Other than that I'm looking forward to where this story goes, though I'm a little wary of pacing. You mentioned you've been thinking about this for a while and you're up to Zou with Canon material (around where I am, I read out of order after Punk Hazard and took a break from it a while ago) but I guess I'm saying I'm not sure what I'd be looking for from the pacing so I hope you have an idea of what you want. I'm unsure of my personal feelings because one piece's Canon is super long, which might be part of why there aren't very many stories, and going too quickly wouldn't be good, but going too slowly would mean it would take a long time to even get to Alabasta and go through meeting my potentially favorite character in Robin, though there could be changes and slow stories can be very good, they would just take a while to touch on cannon events unless plot details are changed. Whatever you do I'm sure it'll be entertaining, so I hope you stay interested and I get to read more soon!

I really liked, i hope you continue the story

Seems like a cool idea, unlike some of the other fics who just give him a different df and start him out the same way. I like the Tone and the Idea that Luffy is or was a part of Shank's Crew. The Lightning Devil Fruit for Luffy seems fun and it seems you aren't copying Enels moveset. Will Luffy have all the Haki types already ?
Really fun First chapter.

Not to sound Pretentious but the correct name of thr DF would be the GORO-GORO NO MI, NOT GORU-GORU.
GORU-GORU NO MI is the Gold DF from the movie Gold

Keep up the good work.

wow nice work author san. You did a great job! It seems that you intend to change Luffys power from rubber to lightning which is the opposite of one another. I also felt that your Luffy character is another version of yours from the way he spoke and think. Your portrayal is more intelligent than the original character but overall it suits well. like you, im going back on watching the anime from the Water 7 arc to present. It's very time consuming if i start at the beginning so I will just skip the first few arcs. Your story seems to be running long as the first chapter intended only for Coby's first appearance. It can help if you fast track your scenarios and events in the story since It makes the story very boring and uninteresting while reading if you want to keep your readers interested until the end. Overall, the story line is good and your writing is very well verse and detailed but being too detailed with the flow of scene makes it boring to the readers.

Excellent first chapter ,really enjoyed it .Luffy is a beast ,can’t wait to hear his back story,it’s going to be a good one I feel,love his fruit ,also when Garp revealed his bounty and the fact he was an enemy of the government and a commander on Shanks crew ,I instantly wanted more .I have absolutely no idea where this is going and that is never a bad thing,judging by your authors note at the end it is going to be a fun ride , it’s Luffy Nami too , I can’t wait to read more chapters.