I like this... It's a nice realistic spin in divergent. You did a great job of using details from the book/movie but still making the characters seem like real, normal(ish) people. It's great!

I absolutely adored this chapter! please update soon!

I looove the concept of this story. Super realistic and not cringey at ALL. it's literally like an average high school experience. great job!

I like this story a lot. Can you add more lemons?

OMG! that was soooooooooo cute! I really liked the line about the walkie talkie at the end too :)

best chapter yet! i love all the character dynamics with tris' family. waiting eagerly for the next chapter :)

Loved the chapter! The dynamic between everyone is always fun to read about and I really liked Ezra! Definitely worth the wait. Can’t wait for the next one!

Great story keep it up

This is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter. Could you possibly have Tobias get into a car crash or have like a lacrosse injury? If you can't, that's fine I'll still love the story. It's just an idea.

Wow!

great chapter

Cute
Can you add some fourtris drama or m scenes soon

Robert really needs to mind his own business. Great Chapter though. Amazing like always.

Oh I definitely enjoyed, this was a very entertaining chapter. I always love a sad chapter, not everything in life is all happiness and roses. It adds more drama and leaves a reader wanting to read more, which is what happened for me. Robert...hm...I guess I feel bad for him, I would hate to lose a crush to someone more handsome, but he is kind of being a dick. This is really good though, I liked the conflict and interesting plot lines. Good job!

SO CUTE! This is EVERYTHING I HOPED FOR AND MORE DX You did SUCH a good JoB!