I don’t even know what to say. I’m not sure if you’ve realized this yet but before I read this, I stumbled across the Secret Moments fic and I was BLOWN THE FUCK AWAY BY IT. I left crazy fucking rambling reviews and then lit you up in DMs On Twitter. I’m not proud. But what is a person supposed to do with ALL THAT!

And now THIS! “Jesus Fuck” is my new favorite line from ANY FIC EVER. and I’m catholic so I’m probably going to hell for it. But it’s the cold hard truth. JESUS FUCK. I CANT.

Why you are trying to give us some load of crap about not doing this scene justice I will never understand. This was absolutely brilliant in every damn way. You captured it perfectly. You write them so damn real I can FEEL THEM. HEAR THEM. IM A FLY ON THE GODDAMN WALL.

Thank you for this. I’m forever in your debt and your new biggest fan. Jesus FUCK (needed it one last time)

I’m so glad you wrote this! I’ve been wanting to reread all the post 8x16 night after fics but they’re so hard to find! This was so great! Loved the passion they had and how you brought it to life! Great work!

You definitely did it justice, this was perfection!

SAM. WHAT. THE. FUCK. Just when I think I’ve read (and loved) every possible version of 8X16 you go and do THIS. I am literally crying. Everything about this was perfect, you are AMAZING

That was perfect, so sweet. I really love your writing style. Thank you so much!

That. Was. Amazing. Oh wow. One of the most beautiful takes on what happened after they disappeared into that bedroom. Your way with words is exquisite! Thanks for sharing!

I liked this version. It was raw and hot but full of love too.

This was so realistic omg, I think you got how it would've gone down to a T

sam! Thank you for writing this. I always say that they would probably last 3 minutes so harvey coming in his pants was chef’s kiss lmao. But seriously, i loved it so much.

I think you did it justice alright. You have this special way of writing them, too on point for your own good. It’s like I can picture them perfectly, and I love it. It was beautiful to read!

This was perfect. First of all, I applaud you for making him come in his pants. He's man enough to endure such a moment, given that Donna takes his embarrassment away. And it speaks volumes about his arousal in that moment. Second of all, I think it's great that you went into detail at times, and other times you left kinda it in the dark. Readers need that to feed their own imagination. And finally, I think you've written that final scene wonderfully. No wonder Donna needed to hear it again. It was deep, yet cryptic, but she knew what he meant. In conclusion: You're the queen of smut, because you don't write it one-dimensional at all. Brava!

oh sam, this was so beautiful. i just read it three times in a row and wow. i love your writing so much. head canon accepted

This was amazing.. we really need more 8x16 or 9x10 fanfics

That was oh so hot and beautiful at the same time.

Sam Sam Sam! This so wonderfully, perfectly captured that night. You more than did this night justice with your amazing writing. It was so hot and intimate and loving and just felt so them.