YES! If there are she-wolves in the Uley pack, then we need to know whether there will ever be a male imprint (or, wolf boy, as you refer to it). Mike is the PERFECT candidate! And Leah just straight up kissing him like that seems OOC, but it's too hot for me to care! Mikeah (wait, that sounds too much like the store Ikea). Doesn't matter - I. Am. Here. For. It!

I love how you made Paul's attraction to Bella more explicit than audrey-ii did. It makes for an interesting dynamic between pack members and imprints of other pack members. And thank you for putting a pregnancy angle at play - Bella is going to have a little wolf cub! And YES, you worked in the amazing kiss from Eclipse!

I love how you included the bonfire scene from Eclipse! And as high-strung as Sam is, I found his stress really amusing, especially when he threatens Jacob with doggie-paddling Puget Sound and is so deadly serious. The Bible passage that Emily quotes was also a nice touch - are they dogs or are they hogs?

I love how you reworked the New Moon scene! The smut was well worth it, and your touching on Bella's skill as a student (interrogative statements vs imperative and all that) was a clever way to explain the rules of the imprint. Can't wait for her to become one of the Quileute tribe!

Will there be some racial tensions in this fic, because Bella is what the Quileutes call a "pale-face"? A white girl bonded to a Quileute boy will surely cause quite a stir. But it is adorable that Bella thinks that doesn't matter and that it must not matter to Jacob either, because he loves her.

And here is even more parallel to Beauty and the Beast. The beautiful girl and her prince trapped as a monster - very apt for Team Jacob. "Bella... it's not me." Bella sounds like Belle, which means beauty. She even looks like Belle a little bit.

I know you lifted some things from audrey-ii's work, but I must say the memory of Bella as a little girl was a nice addition!

I’m sorry, because I know you acknowledge Audreyii-fic in an effort to do the right thing. But it isn’t right. Unless she has explicitly said you may use her work you shouldn’t. Yes it is fanfic but please tell us she said it was okay.

I don't understand why she moved to the reservation and without a fight. Victoria is dead, she hates Sam. The pack sem to control her, Jared locking her away, Sam "respectfully" telling her what to do and her hurting Charlie again without a second thought by running away to the reservation.

Amazing.

Amazing. Glad Leah imprinted.

Love it.

Excellent. Hope everything goes ok.

Amazing. Hope Bella is ok.

Excellent.