I have to say, this story is alright, and for a fanfic about grease 2 it is interesting, if you want you can check out some of the other stories on here. You might be surprised how good some of them actually are. Again good work, I hope you continue

This is a great story so far. It's awesome seeing more G2 (Grease 2) fans and fiction stories. I've seen the past few years, some G2 disappear from this site (not sure honestly why through). If you need help with characters, etc. I don't mind giving you assistance. I have helped a few G2 fiction writers with their stories over the years by giving feedback. Eagerly waiting for updates.

Really loving this story. More please!

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You go, Michael! And Frenchy and Ms McGee, you go too!

Loved it! And Michael knows how to fight his own battles

I think I said it before, I really like how you describe characters thoughts. And I insist, your story is way too good for here, most stories are simply unreadable. I wonder why it hasn’t more reviews. Out of envy from other so called writers, maybe.

God, you’re a natural born writer!

You know, I wrote a kind of parody about Grease 2 where Johnny was Master Johnny for the other guys. I think the original character is a walking parody, in fact. ;)

Great job with his descripción!

Clap clap clap! Love this

I love how you describe characters, both physically and psychologically.

I love this chapter too, how you explain characters’ background. But I’m kinda confused about first part of the chapter, hope you give more information later. Again, excellent job. Congrats

Excellent job!