| Reviews for Love and Despair |
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  Guest chapter 20 . 7/21 great chapter keep it up and what about ur other stories will they update |
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/16 great chapter |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/12 I hope the traitors die a painful death because of what they put Ash through! I also hope Ash gets his remaining pokemon back from the traitors! |
 emiyaryo chapter 17 . 7/10 great chapter |
| Emmie chapter 16 . 7/7 Cool! Are Paul, Trip, and Prof Sycamore gonna join Team Alpha? |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/26 great chapter keep it up and along with your other stories |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/25 great chapter keep it up |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/22 great chapter |
| KiryuFanGirl chapter 9 . 6/21 Nice Job keep up the good work! I take everything back about Emily (well in this story anyways.) she does have a crush on Gladion and right now his ship is with Golly (and I’m okay with that; in some stories) Though I’d prefer Emily not be here if she’s evil cause she’s not (though she can fall under dark spells.) but if she’s included as a human she’s a good one; she takes responsibilities for her actions even if it means her death. After all (I don’t know if you are familiar with JK Rowling’s amazing wizard-ing world of Harry Potter and I am a proud Hufflepuff.)Well goodbye for now and I do hope to see some of your other stories updated as soon as possible; though I do have one final question to propose (though this is about some of your other stories that involve the new Galar region—will you just be focusing on the first part of your Galar adventure, or will you include The Isle of Armor and The Crown Tundra when they are released? Goodbye and thank you, I do apologize for reviewing once again, bye! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/20 You should have Ash harrass and mentally torment the traitors, and he was ways to do so, especially in the cases of Max and May if you get my drift. In other words have Ash bully the hell out of them. |
| KiryuFanGirl chapter 9 . 6/20 Have you chosen the 18 members of Team Alpha, cause as I said before I would like Emily to be a member; now she isn’t exactly a traitor but is she a pokemon or a human— if she’s human; will she become a pokemon? Plus the next chapter will focus on Mark and Lillie — I would like to see soon a chapter focused on Emily and Gladion. I do apologize if I’m reviewing once again so soon; though I do tend to go overboard a little anyways I hope to see the next chapters soon have a good day! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/20 great chapter keep it up |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/20 great chapter |
| Emmie chapter 7 . 6/19 Nice story, I love how Ash and the others showed themselves. However, are Gladion, Prof Kukui, and Prof Burnet going to join? And why did you leave out Prof Sycamore? What about him? |
| KiryuFanGirl chapter 7 . 6/19 Interesting... Keep up the good work! I have a few Ideas/Suggestions. 1st off I would like my OC Emily to be in here as a part of Team Alpha (what I think that Gladion should have someone to love and my OC does have a big crush on him.) Now the second Idea; since Ash is basically Arceus I think that the heads of Team Alpha should each have a legendary/mythical pokemon as a partner; I do have a bit of a preference to that-the legendary/mythical pokemon should represent their partners in some way; for example since Insey is known as the bug witch her pokemon should be Genesect. (Though I don't really have a legendary/mythical pokemon preference for Emily just yet; though I'm thinking Lunala that is if it's not taken by anyone else on Team Alpha.) I hope you like these ideas, though this is your story you don't have to use them if you don't want to. Anyways I hope you like it and of course have a good day! |
