Ok, this is fairly new and you got my attention. I don't really pay attention to new fanfics often until other people see it but this was too tempting. Off to a good start and keep it up.

Gotta say, intrest has been peaked! I've been thinking about the posibility of Lloyd being possesed by the Overlord for a while, actually starting my own fic. this is off to a great start, and i can't wait to read more!

Ooooooo

It’s only the first chapter and I’m already hooked!

This looks really interesting! I want to see where it goes.

hhhh floof!

This is great! I love the way you write. Descriptive, but not overwhelmingly so. Keep it up!