In this chapter there are several parts that are exactly the same as LN so do improvisation. This fanfiction is interesting in my opinion.

Love having jibril

COOL! Great start bro. Hope you keep it up and not drop. If you update regularly at a fast rate with decent word count, you've got yourself a reader. If you want to post weekly or bi monthly, i hope you keep this size and increase if you update monthly.
Anyways, thanks for the chap and hope you update soon.

Damn man, I read the chapter and I was honestly impressed with how much of in detail you are explaining this story. It has really potential, I hope you continue with this pace and I hope you will get even better in the future.

hell yeah I love this story

Holy shit this gives me goosebumps I like it.

Me alegra que sacaras otro capitulo, en verdad me dejo muy sorprendido la cantidad de NPC que creo Madara

This is honestly amazingwell, everything Overlord related to me is JUST amazing. It is honestly my favorite Anime of all times, I just love it to bits, so a mix of favorite Character and my favorite Anime is heaven, I just hope you do justice to their namethrough I also hope it doesn't follow canon completely.

That is all I had to say. Peace.

more pleas continue

Mmm liking it so far, i do hope Madara fights seriously when the situation calls for it.
Anything on the romance department? If it's a harem please don't go overboard with the numbers.

I do assume Madara had relationships in the world he was sent to? Oh please tell Madara kept up with he's ninja training.

Thanks for the chapter appreciate it.

A story with high potential. I don't understand what the other guy means by acting nothing like madara. Madara has a lot of leeway with how he can be developed in these kinds of stories because he can reflect on his past failures during the 4th great ninja war. As long as Madara retains his smug, wargod attitude in combat, but also strives for peace outside of it, he isn't really out of character.

This seems nothing at all like Madara. You just took Momonga and replaced him with Madara, the prologue is literally the same as the beginning chapter of Overlord, except you switched names and inserted small snippets of Naruto.

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Dude u just replaced ainz for madara also an immortal human is not a heteromorph. Make something like an automaton atleast