Reviews for Gamer to Gangster |
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![]() ![]() I hope they get nicknames soon black dragon of the saints and white tigress. |
![]() ![]() Your definitely making improvements on taunting in combat, but maybe work a tad more on conversing dialogue, some things could've been worded better at the end. Either way, excellent chapter, looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it so far, I've played all the rest but the first so this kinda helps filling it in. I know it's gonna be awhile but can't wait till the third and fourth for the sheer insanity. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue to the end, anything to get moar story |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I love this. Hope you can keep it goin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter nice job, keep it up. Also skip all the activities, just stick to the plot |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() Love the chapter, I'll definitely agree things got more intense in SR 2, playa got sadistic in that game, also idea for the Asian name 'shengren longwei' supposedly Chinese for 'saint's dragon greatness', update soon m8. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thus the end of los carnel and thus begins the vice kings can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() . . . Oh this follow the video game rules instead of going for the realistic edits. Good to know going forward even if it's a mild downer to my fandom about it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You now looking back was anyone else trying to figure out why 3 different gang squads were doing there? |
![]() ![]() Really enjoying this, only complaint is that the dialogue seems a bit censored, like who says 'curses' over 'shit!' Or 'fuck!', also dialogue like 'the saints aren't scared of the carnales' is too defensive to be good taunting, it needs to be more aggressive ie. 'The carnales ain't worth shit!'. Otherwise I'm loving this story and am all for the harem, also can we get a bit more description on the boss and MC, maybe an actor/actress that's close to what they look like. Looking forward to the next update m8. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im mentioned! I feel loved. [] |
![]() ![]() ![]() well done cant wait for the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Average Setting and Character introduction for the First page. It will get a 61/10. Ok by the way which Asian is he? Is he a Western Asian? East Asian? South East Asian? South Asian? Or you are just going with the stereotypical Asian Race... The East Asians right? |