Beautiful ending to a great story! I am very happy it all worked out in the end. The family back togetherI would certainly be interested in other POVs if you ever write them.

I’m so happy to see that it all ended well for them! I really loved this story from start to finish, the dark path that it was taking was amazing and really well done. I can’t wait to read more from you.

I can only describe my feelings as something like a warm, soft C major chord in my brain. That ending was just so happy! :) Great story!

I'm so worried for everyone! I hope it ends well. Keep up the good work!

I’m into this story so much that I’m scared to the core. Can’t wait to read more!

I’m really loving this story. In do love stories with a darker tone. Although I crave happy endings too so I hope Ahsoka and Obi-Wan get out of this alive somehow. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Such a nice surprise to see this updated! Love this story, looking forward to the next one!

Hey, I'm really enjoying this, can't wait for more! :)

Liking it

Interesting story so far. Excited to see where you take this.

Get him, Grevious! Show him what superior Separatist firepower can do to a weakened, isolated Jedi!

I like that you gave Ahsoka additional protection. More Jedi should wear GAR-standard uniforms and trooper helmets. Tradition is one thing, but adequate protection on the battlefield (and integrated communications with forward troops) is priceless.

Impressive opening. Very intense, with good suspense.

Wonderful ! Update soon !

Oh my god
I hope you plan to update soon, that was a cruel cliffhanger !
Amazing work