I loved it! I think the tension that you have managed to build is really effective, and I can't wait to read more(-:

I really enjoy this fanfic. I hope they can work through this.

God, Cassidy’s so annoying. Talk about jealous.
But I love this! And I admire your persistence, I’m writing a Divergent fanfic on Wattpad, but I’ll probably drop out at like Chapter 5 lmao
This fanfic is awesome!
- Nish

Ok, I’ve just got to say I just LOVE your story so far. I love your plot too. Can’t wait for more. :)

yeess, Uriah is definitely the Leo Valdez of divergent!

Nooo! This Cassidy has to be a miscommunication! I love both points of view and couldn’t agree more with tris/mar/Chris trio. I struggle with the emotional cutting part but mainly because it doesn’t appear Tris struggles with being not being forthcoming with her emotions. Lastly I vote yes to take this story to an M! Again, I love your writing.

I like that your not afraid to tackle real world problems.

i hope they didnt really sleep together. the thought of Four and Tris with other people kinda bothers me a lot. this chapter is really good, thanks for updating. i cant wait to see them together again.

nonononononono! pls say that they didnt dO iT cuz it doesnt sit right with me, (also one idea is that maybe Cassidy knows that Four doesnt really like her, so she tells him shes pregnant to get him to stay even though they never even did it). also one more question, around how many more chapters will it take for Four and Tris to get back together? thanks! have a good day!

hi again, i really hope that Four and Cassidy didn’t ya know... it really doesn’t sit right with me. so PLEASE say they didn’t do it, (also sorry if this isn’t way you planned this story out, please don’t change it if this wasn’t the plan. sorry for being so judgmental :P) have a great day though!

dyksyditskgxhckvaiftwbbufjafivqiqvogqivwovsigsoag!? nooooooooooooooooooo. whyyyyyyy. this chapter was really good and really sad! I can’t wait for you to update again! also, not to sound impatient, but around how many more chapters will there be until they get back together(you don’t have to answer if you don’t want us to know)? Take your time with the next one!

"honestly my heart only has room for Tobias" yes. yes. I agree 120%. and "I never loved you!" omg I started crying. I am crying aahhh. this story is so good

Awesome! You are so good at this!

Ok I re-read all 8 to be up to speed on my thoughts. 1) I love books where they meet in Abnegation previously as well. 2) love the Robert change. 3) I liked your four POV. Maybe review some key points in both? 4) though I do like it when Uriah and tris are close, I never actually see them as anything more. Maybe that could be a plot twist between zeke and Uriah of pushing them together? Idk. Just an idea. As usual, your writing is great, easy to imagine the characters, and flows well.

thanks for replying! I really liked this chapter! also I just realized earlier you said that you liked Uriah and Tris as siblings, so sorry if I pressured you into that! take your time with the next chapter! have a great day and stay safe!