at laat you understand tthat a professional writer complete his or her story with own determination . dont care about others. i too dont dont care about my language and haters. i just wants to finish my story in my own way... its really going good. hope abhijeet will get his life partner and expectations... that he lost in his past

Gud that u continue it... interesting onessss

Twist la diya apna na to nice chapter update next soon

Thank u so much for resuming the story...please complete it

Too good yaar...ved and Ravi's entry in duo life...aur bhi suspense hai shayad story mein... please abhijeet aur daya sir ko jaldi se mila do story mein... really missing their conversation... waiting for your next update...

yayy ! So happy that you've decided to continue the story. A big thanks to you for coming back with an another awesome chapter.
I loved the way (like everytime) you campared time with a doctor. It was such a deep thought. and then how beautifully you described everything about the bureau and human relations. And That line "we realize the importance of a moment only when it becomes a memory" made me nostalgic. It reminded me of such moments which I miss now. Going Ahead, That new officer Ravi, as shown, is really possessive about daya. It's not his mistake though because he know him from his childhood. But The behaviour of him towards abhijeet is not good. He should not interfere in between daya's life that much on whom he should treat as a friend and how. Maybe It's just because He doesn't know everything that was before and has happened between abhijeet and daya. Somebody, like freddy who knows our duo well, should tell ravi everything and explain him the situation and maybe after that he won't do such insulting things to abhijeet. And the conversation of ved and abhijeet was amazing. Abhijeet is such a good hearted person. It's true that ved has different perspective of the things and he won't understand abhijeet that well. I don't know why but I still suspect the characters of Ravi and Ved because of the attacks that took place on our duo. Maybe someone of them is involved or maybe not. I think watching CID too much has made me suspect everyone on every small thing...HeheP
Anyways, Excited for the abhijeet-ved trip and what happens between ravi-daya. Update soon !D

Fantastic chapter

Superb

Awesome it my favourite story

I would suggest you write the stories in the language you are most comfortable in.. And I think you'll be more comfortable writing it in English... So I think that you should continue it in English... Keep going your doing well.

See I get it ur stry is penned beautifully and there's too much depth in it and everything is justified
But in both of ur stories it just seems a case of hero worship
It feels as if u molded scenes in a way to prove that Abhijeet is the best he is the ultimate sacrificer and everybody else just blames him and then again yearn fr him wen he leaves. Let me give u some mere yet evident eg shreya might hv been the one who arrested Abhijeet and she was absolutely wrong. But she was the one in CID in train ep who asked daya to rekindle his frdshp with Abhijeet when she had lost her love. If u remember in khabri ka maut , Abhijeet accused daya of murdering his khabri even when he knew that whatever maybe the reason daya can't murder a person. In that orphanage wala ep , Abhijeet continuously accused daya till he found out the truth. Again I'm not denying the fact that Abhijeet has always stood up fr daya but there hv been instances where he hadn't. Daya behaved with such rudeness during the dareya track because Abhijeet wasn't telling the truth and constantly lied to him. Whenever daya tried to ask what was the reason Abhijeet replied he can't. Well ik Abhijeet was helpless bcoz of that kasm thing but he could've chosen his frd's whole life rather than choosing momentary happiness fr him. If u remember Abhijeet had hurt the whole team during akakr mission. So it was balanced in the show. And I want it to be balanced in ur stry as well as u r an extremely good writer. You could've spared some sense that daya wouldn't mistrust Abhijeet so badly fr his old frd because the stry started frm there. Pls try to keep ur stories balanced. Hope you understood my point. Tc...

It's ok. If you don't know how to write in Hindi, write in English. There are writers here who write just in English.
Your comfort is a must. But, please complete these stories. No need of Hindi, writer.

Dearest Author,
We all love your stories. You are a good writer. Your stories and your ideas are not silly. It's completely fine to not know Hindi. I may not know your language too but we are still able to communicate because we both know English. It was pretty obvious that you were not a colloquial Hindi speaker and it's not a big deal. I know that you took a lot of time to write conversations in Hindi and I appreciate it. It is okay to start a story writing it in Hindi and English and continuing in complete English. It won't seem weird. You don't have to be sorry that don't know a language that is not your mother tongue. To be honest, I loved your stories. The way you write is beautiful. Your opening paragraphs are the best. The way you describe everything is so magnificent that it often renders me speechless and in complete awe of your writing prowes. It is commendable that you could write the Hindi that you did. I studied Sanskrit upto 8th and I can't write proper Sanskrit even with Google Translate. One more thing, all writers here are not proficient. They at times have great ideas but not everyone can write proper English. That's also fine because this is ff. It is the ideas that matter, not how you are able to present it. Although, you belong to the rare grade of authors who can have a good idea and write and present it well. This will never be overshadowed by the fact that you don't speak Hindi. This story is special for me. I had always wondered what would have happened if Abhijeet had been pushed to his breaking point and how he would react. There are many such stories written but unfortunately, they all a version of the characters which are very different from the original series. I had always desired to see a version closer to the characters in the original and this story managed to pique my interest and l highly enjoy it. My request would be for you to continue it albeit completely in English. Although, I do not want to force you and it is ultimately your decision. Love.

Dear...why you are saying like this...
your hindi is quite understandable...there is no difficulties in reading your stories...
If you are not comfortable with hindi... then you write it in English...
Your stories are awesome...
so plzzzz don't leave it in the mid like this just because of language...
You write it fully in English...we are ready to read because reading the story is important and how good it is that's important...not the language...
so plzzzz change your decision yaar...
And by the way who said that your stories are silly...plzzz don't use the word silly for your stories...because writing a story is not a easy job...
Your stories are too good...
Plzzz consider my words...plzzz complete the stories in your comfort zone...(ie) in english...
I hope you understand...
I am waiting for the next chapter...
Plzzzz update...plzzzzz

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