I need more of this...
It is a good one but too short :")

Good for a first story but it's in the wrong category.

"She-Ra, Princess of Power" is the original 80's series. This story is clearly set in the reboot Netflix series "She-Ra AND THE Princesses of Power." That series has it's own separate category.

Please move it. You're far more likely to get readers that way. If you are unsure how, please send me a PM and I'll tell you.