I can’t wait for the next chapter! I’ve loved what you’re doing with the Fan fiction so far!

It’s been a long time since I’ve venture to the Maze Runner category of stories, but I’m glad I did and found yours. Gally has always been a favorite of mine, and the lack of stories with him as the main love interest really get in my nerves, so this is a gem to find.
These first three chapters were great, I really like Vicky, and her interactions with Newt and Minho are very fun to read. The POV from Gally was also a delight, it’s good to see inside his head and it gives a depth to the story. I can’t wait to see how her bonds with them develop.
One thing I’d like to sorta criticize is the way you’ve written Newt speaking, when you’re writing an accent, it's best to use slangs and such to demonstrate where he’s from, because unless it’s a brief appearance from a character and you really want to emphasize his manner of speaking, it becomes hard to read and takes people out of the story. Other than that, you’ve only got some minor grammar mistakes, and overall it’s very well written.
Your story has a lot of potential, and I hope you continue it!

Aw I like this. Gally is my fav. Yay for another GallyxOC writer! Welcome. This is really good by the way. Well done.