Reviews for 999 Miles to Go |
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![]() ![]() ...Awww! The sweetest, funniest, truest brother fic of these two! Gotta love their relationship, really. Frigile, but... somehow, it still grows stronger. Love this wonderful piece! The quote and the song so fits this perfectly! Awesome, awesome fic, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg so cute! |
![]() ![]() Such a good story! If this happened in the manga, i would be on the edge of my seat! Awesome story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that was very good. I love the simplicity of the story. I'd feel so hurt if my brother didn't trust me about something as silly as how fast to drive around a curve :P...or was too stubborn to listen. But it was sweet how Yuki apologized. And I liked the little argument about the heat in the car. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was very sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a cute story! You really captured Ayame well, and you had an amazing balance of his deep side and hyper side in exactly the right places. I always thought that though Yuki hates Ayame talking, he'd be even more creeped out by a silent Ayame, so I was super psyched to see that idea here! Great minds think alike! _ All in all, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, that was sweet, and something that I can definitely imagine happening! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED THIS. It was so, so, so them. Ayame's ramblings and his mature, adult side that Yuki so rarely sees... I love how he was able to take control of the car so calmly, so quickly. And how the two brothers were able to sort of, hm, see eye to eye? At least a little bit better. And the end, where Yuki can't stand Ayame being silent and just demands the story anyway. SO, SO, SO GOOD. We need more Ayame/Yuki brotherly interaction fics. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everything about your story is perfect except for one thing: it's confusing how Yuki suddenly brings up the heat. I love your work! This is excellent. You portrayed the characters exceptionally well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I really loved this. This was great- you captured Ayame and Yuki's relationship perfectly. And that is no easy feat, so kudos to you! Beautifully written, and very descriptive- a truly wonderfully written fanfiction! Keep up the amazing work! - LOSGAP D |
![]() ![]() I love the part where Yuki is planning to kill Shigure! Ayame is a little OOC but it works. I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! The characters were spot on and your spelling and grammar is great (THANK YOU for that, by the way). And I love the song you referenced haha. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, how cute! Ayame rules! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a cute/sweet/funny story! Everyone was so in character and I do adore the 'brotherly bond' of Ayame and Yuki. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how cute, they're really getting close and I can really see this happening |