Aww she's such a sweetheart for dragging him to bed and taking care of him! I really love the rapport they have going on. Will it develop into something more, I wonder!

AWW this was so sad but John comforting her was so sweet! I really like how you showed the way John reacted to the war - we don't see that in the show - and it's interesting seeing his perspective.

John and Mai chatting away was so sweet. But oh gosh I can’t imagine how sad Mai is when she comes back to find Dorthey gone :(

Hell yes! Mai getting the appreciation she deserves! I’m really loving this story so far and can’t wait for you to post more
(Btw the text posted twice in a row on this chapter - so it starts again halfway through)

Thanks for clearing Tommy’s intentions up. I should have know it was to prepare for the expansion. It was really sweet of Polly to stand up for Mai and call Tommy out on his savior complex

What a tension filled chapter! You wrote Tommy so true to form and I can’t wait to see why he gave Mai a chance. Very excited to keep reading :)

There are some formatting issues with your first and second chapters. Sorry!