i read everything in one sitting! yes, it was that good! and im gonna continue on to the sequel, right...now!...

Great story.

GOOD TIMING!

I take back what I said about Julia. Brilliant introduction and I like the complexity of it all, and the confusion and the ... everything...

This chapter is absolutely brilliant for grabbing attention. The previous one set things up but was a bit...commonplace? This one, however, starts adding vibes and hints, winks and nods at things to come. It's great for being that little bit subtle and that little bit intriguing. I really can't wait to read the rest.

~ Tuppence ~

I hope you don't mind my reviewing your story.

It's a great start. The way you didn't introduce Vicious until towards the end of the first part was great - I really was convinced that it was Spike. And Spike as a flirt? Very true to his character in the anime.

The only slightly OOC-ness was the long gossip chain that Spike mentioned - I feel like he would be too lazy to do it, really. It's a great start though, and I can't wait to read the rest.

Subtle mention of Julia - but surely, despite being AU, she must hold some special place in the story?

~ Tuppence ~

Sometimes woman are the hardest on other woman what on earth is Julia's problem im glad that Faye finally stood up for herself. You have to know your relationship sucks when when boyfriend doesn't go after you when you're drunk and storm off. Luv this chapter im looking forward to reading the rest

Hello!

How are you? :D I'm a spanish girl and I'm a great fan of your fics (specially:

Foreven Broken) and I want to ask you one question: Can I translate FB to

spanish? I began to translate it last night and I'll love to update it with

your approval, so it's why I ask you.

Anyway, I don't know if I have the right to ask you this.. but.. are you going

to drop your current fic? I love the secuel and it'll be a pity you don't

continue. So, please, go for it and make us happy with your exciting story!

Seriously, your fics rulz! And I want to say you it :D So, continue, continue,

continue, bc you have the talent, the manner and the touch. Faye and Spike are

the best on your hands. I love them. I love your fics. I want to read more about

them.

Please, come back with another chapter! We're waiting for you! :D

And, answer me, please, I REALLY want to translate it to spanish! (of course,

saying it's YOURS and all the show .)

See you soon! (I hope :D)

From Spain.

*Aliance*

haha, i am constantly guilty of writing corny and cheesey things that i want to kick myself for afterwards, so i know what i'm talking about when i say This was not corny at all! the beginning was just really sweet. i was grinning so much as i was reading it.

oh, and how i loath julia. dont know why. she's just bitchy as is the case in this fic :) so thanks for making it easy for me to hate her so much in this story!

xoxo!

okay, i started reading this soo long ago but never got a chance to read past the third chapter. then as i was going through my 'Favs' list today, i realized i hadnt reveiwed for this! and how ashamed i am! i usually dont like fics like this since the characters come off as ooc, but this one caught my eye for some reason. and i love it! everyone is in-character and the writing is superb. its all just so great.

okay, off i go to the fifth chapter for more of this amazingness.

space raider away!

xoxo!

It's a fantastic and entertaining story so far. I like how organized your plots are Nirvana-san.

Even though you're already finished with your story, I hope you don't turn Julia into a complete bitch/OOC.

Besides Julia seeming a little out of character, You story's fine so far. Especially during Fyae and Spike's first meeting when Faye looked at him weirdly and thought that Spike was wearing an afro. Spike- an afro? *bursts out laughing* There I go again...

Keep up the good work Nirvana-san!

O! FINAL CHAPTER? ZOMG! Oh yeah..I did find the sequel first! *Runs off to Sequel.* OH YA I LOVEED IT!

X_X IM SCARED

Teh fic is...so great..x.x; like British soap operas

Hmm..and she's about to be proposed to...fucking his best friend. She's going to be in deep shit

Spike so seriously fucked up x_X

Dammit, their going to be in SO much trouble. e.e