I like this story very much. Rewatching the early episodes where Ryan was first introduced made me realize just how cold Calleigh and Eric were towards him. I put it down to the fact that they had lost a very good friend, but I think they distrusted him and thought that he was trying to replace a member of their team that couldn't be replaced.

I think that you did a very good job in showing the dynamics between these two characters. It was confusing in areas because I feel that you pushed the story too fast, but I really did enjoy the story in the end. I really liked that you allowed Ryan and Eric to understand one another.