can't believe i'm just now finding this fic. it's great, an awesome role-reversal with cloud being the boss and zack his sidekick of sorts. especially love the bit with reno and going into cloud's new relationship with the turks. honestly they're all boyfriends at this point.

what if you made a dirge of cerberus fanfic with an oc, hardly see any of those stories, and more shelke and shalua moments (like maybe your oc is paid by shalua to help find her long lost little sister). or a fanfic where vincent or cloud and tifa take shelke in and adopts her. just a thought, and typing again in case the message didn't get through.

And he’s back! Hiding things in plane sight with a friendly attitude. Gotta love Zack!

My guess is that Cloud wants help investigating Zack. Look forward to seeing what the results bring up!

Back, again. Enjoyed it anyway. Love the how the Au stuff reflects (Cetra - Citrus? lol)

Great chapter! The dream stuff further hints at one of my guesses. And am so looking forward to seeing where you bring this.

I like the fact that Zack obviously isn’t that great of a fighter. He might have something hidden inside of him but so far. Being an armature kendo practitioner isn’t going to cut it against skilled opponents unless he is lucky and foolhardy.

Just saw this, and I’m happy to have come across it. Reading your first chapter I think that it’s a really interesting premise. I have a few Guesses where it is going and believe that it could result in a quite the revelations for both Cloud and Zack. Or not. Either way, your writing reads great and I’m in for this ride!

Really liked your author’s note in the beginning, and happy that such an old timer is back! Love to hear more about what inspired you to start writing again.

this is a fantastic premise but the homo stuff isnt for me. just wanted to say how interesting your idea is.

I do applaud his ability to keep his fanboy to himself, but i'm still annoyed that I had to read his internal monologue about it. Wished this started a bit differently so the MC can get his act together.

Ah! This chapter was pretty great! I'm hooked! :D

Good story I love it and hope for more