Even if it was short it was a good chapter. Looking forward to more.

Enjoyed this chapter. Congrats on making it through the alphabet!

Well at least one elf isn’t a total jerk, then again m, I wonder how he’ll react to learning that Galbatorix is Eila’s father. Don’t worry Arya, I can already tell you’ll be a great mom.

I’m speechless. Not only did you create a unique storyline and run with it, you created a new perspective on Eragon/Arya. I mean many fanfics say that they lived happily ever after, eternally apart, blah blah blah. Your story really questions what happened if they did do it in the bed(got to keep it reasonably PG/PH13. If Arya had a child, how would she feel. It really is just like huh, that’s new. So before I go on a record length comment I just want to thank for writing this story. Please please finish it, but if you get too busy I understand. I have to get account on here to keep tabs on this story. Live long and prosper.

I’m speechless. Not only did you create a unique storyline and run with it, you created a new perspective on Eragon/Arya. I mean many fanfics say that they lived happily ever after, eternally apart, blah blah blah. Your story really questions what happened if they did do it in the bed(got to keep it reasonably PG/PH13). If Arya had a child, how would she feel. It really is just like huh, that’s new. So before I go on a record length comment I just want to thank for writing this story. Please please finish it, but if you get too busy I understand. I have to get account on here to keep tabs on this story. You will know that it’s the person who wrote this review by Live and rain

Lovely chapter. Keep up the good work!

I really like this chapter! All of them actually :P thanks for continuing your writing, I love your work, it is very similar to the original story so good on ya!

PS. I have read the series through about 15 times now and I am considering adding your writing to the end of my reading each round through the sieres, if you understand what I mean. anyhow, thanks again!

Great story! Can't wait to read the story as it progresses! Dying for Eragon to make it back but I feel like we've got a lot of chapters to go before that happens.

I prefer long chapters, and as long as it moves along, I’m fine with it.

Loved this chapter! Thankyou

I really like seeing this whole new side to Arya, being a mother has changed her a lot and I'm eager to see how she'll go through it.

I'm excited to see how Eila will adjust to being out in the real world, also, Eragon is going into dad mode already.

Great fan fiction. Only that Eragon and the elves traveled east at the end of inheritance and not west

Omg I love your fanfic! I love what u r doing with this, but we all really need an update. So plz update and in exchange you get reviews.

Eila's so open-minded about all her past trials, it's a very admirable trait. ha, so they are related, that's good to hear, I think she's a good addition to the family. By the way, when will we see Eragon again? Will we ever see his thoughts on all this?