Another excellent chapter! Thank you so much for giving me something to read.

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Brilliant!

Can't wait until the next installment! :)

Another interesting take on the storyline. I like it. I wish there was more personal info about Harry and new fam. Things like how he was when they first got him away from the Dursleys, how he was with Sirius, how he interacted with his school chums and what they were learning. I fell I know more about his grandparents and Hermione than him. Anywho, I do like it, and you are still in the process of writing it, so keep on, and keep your muse happy!
Also, perhaps for some of your longer paragraphs you could divide them in half or thirds? It can be a tad difficult to read when they are so jam packed full of info. ;)

One consistency I always enjoy in your stories - is pointing out that Dumbles added 2 other middle names to his name - so oaths taken with those names - could not be made to exact the punishment the breaking of oaths deserves.

I enjoy how much 'background' you have for these stories.

Thanks for sharing and stay safe.

Blinking bloody brilliant!

It's funny, I never liked history in school, but I like the history you present through your stories, it makes good background info.

great

Your story is just brilliant! I can’t wait to see how this little meeting with Dumbledore goes, lol! Keep up the great writing!

Loll, maybe carried away, but very interesting facts and info.

Think they could have waited until Ron was being rude enough on the train to bring the hammer down on him

This has a different feel [so far] to your stories that you've already written. But I'm still here reading and plan to, as long as you continue to post chapters.

I do like the detail and completeness of the background.

Thanks for sharing. Take care.

can't wait to read more

Actually, according to Mr. Tolkien, the proper plural of "dwarf" is "dwarrows," and he just used "dwarves" because of convention at the time. ;D
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Gotta love those busybodies who think they have the right to tell you what you can drive in a given neighborhood...just like the ones who try to tell you today what you can do on YOUR OWN PROPERTY.
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I think everybody's reviews are down right now. I know some of my stories have some pretty high traffic, but I have only two or three reviews on a lot of them. I guess everybody's just got other stuff on their minds right now.
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I used to hear all kinds of stories about people who brought "souvenirs" home from the War, but nothing on the kind of scale Jimmy did. I can totally see it happening, though.