Thank you for this beautiful story. Your version of their kids are how i imagined them to be. I really loved reading it. Made me swoon.

Okay, but that issue of their children finding out about their dad being a murderer, I had never thought about that before. And i don't even remember, reading a fic addressing this issue.
That was unexpected.
I'm glad you decided to really tackle that.

Like Hot Chocolate, it warmed my soul reading this.

Me encantó... Una visión de lo que nos hubiera gustado ver en la serie

Love this story...you really did great knowing your character, which shows a lot of work in building the story. Thank you for sharing it with us. Missed reading all the old stories...I wrote a few of them and feel some day I should try one more.

This ending is so beautiful! But i recommend not to read it in a train with a mask on, because sobbing when you are not allowed to take your mask of is not pretty ;). It was such a great story, i hope that you will keep on writing the mentalist stories.

I love this! It was so sweet. Exactly what I needed it.

Oh this was so cute. It was nice to see their lives play out with their kids and all the parallels they had to their parents in different ways. And the Cho cameo. I gotta love me some Cho.

I personally liked Emily and Harry and all the parallels in that way. I also loved that whole scene with Teresa and her daughter by the lake and the question she asked. The stories that she needed to hear.

Great story.

Thanks for the delightful, introspective and happy trip through the years of the Jane family!

Really nice, thanks!

What a lovely story, nice to see their lives play out happily

Lindo...

I love it!

Thank you for writing this. It is so good to read about Jane's.

I like this chapter. It is nice to see Jane and Lisbon with teenagers. Well done.