I don't want to sound cruel or anything, but I really like the fact that although Elsa starts to see what she had done wrong Anna kepts pushing it into her face. I think some people need to be at there lowest to be open for critisim. They are only able to see how much they hurt you with their behaviour if you start hurting them. I slowly get the feeling Elsa is one of them. (Just some personal experiences of mine)
I also like the fact that Anna is still wary of Elsa and says she can't trust her anymore.
On the other hand I get why Elsa had acted the way she has. If are a big sister you want to protect your little siblings.
Anyway I love your idea of them needing time to heal completly. It isn't healthy to just magically puff away all your problems.
You said you had a tough time so I hope life gets better soon! Don't worry about later updates. In fact your updating rate has been incredible fast. It can be clearly seen you put a lot of time and effort into this.

Oh man, that hurt but not as much as the alternative of them not talking and hating each other

Thank you for another great chapter. Some of the tension was finally released, the change felt so good, although they still have a lot of everything ahead of them. Can't wait to read more about it (and I wouldn't really mind, if there was more than 30 chapters - actually, I would love it!) But firstly, take care of yourself, we will wait. Be safe! Hope everything will be better soon. (Also, congratulations on the number of views - it is well deserved and I am sure the number will only grow!)

Well, I understand why this chapter is one of your favorites, in part because it just became one of my favorite ones too. It's very sad to see that Anna and Elsa's relationship will always be marked by that tragic event, but at the same time, they are going to be sisters again, and it's amazing how you encapsulated all of that nuances and layers here. Also, while I don't know what exactly you are dealing with now, and you really don't have to explain it if you don't want to, I wish you all of the best to deal with it and heal, and don't forget to take time for yourself.
So again, wonderful job and stay safe!

As I said before the frozen endings were too clean. This is so realistic. Anna admitting she can't be happy go lucky all the time. It was nice Elsa admitted she learned from Anna but who knows what'll happen?

Woah this is intense and keeps getting better and better! Seeing updates in my email makes me happy!

Yeah Anna was the real hero of both movies. And if something had happened to Elsa it would have affected her and Kristoff's relationship. Hopefully all 3 will be able to move on. Though it will take time.

“Have I gone mad?”

Given all the emotional beat downs Anna has received over the years, she is likely to hide many psychological issues beneath her manic facade. I love that you have her questioning her own sanity. It is the surest indicator that she is Not mad. The mad don’t have a lot of self-awareness. Many Anna stories describe her erratic behavior or convoluted thoughts but most often it is written off as just Anna being Anna. For her to question herself shows as much strength as standing up to Elsa.

I do wish Kristoff could have more substance but his place seems to be the occasional discordant note to break up an overwhelming soundtrack to Anna’s existence.

I am totally invested in this story. Love it!

Oh, this was really tense. Poor Anna, poor Elsa. I think I forgot to mention how great it is that you are looking at everything that happened in F2 from more of Anna’s point of view (at least the parts that you follow — I am also happy that you are not following that weird, rushed F2's original end when Elsa without any real thought and seemingly with such an ease abandons people she loves and also the whole kingdom for which she greatly cared, I am sure of this). I am a bit like Elsa, so I’ve always looked at what happened from Elsa’s point of view and I understood why she did what she did. It somehow did not cross my mind how would Anna really feel about all of it and it is only natural that she sees it differently. But with that “Elsa” in me, I guess I just did exactly what Elsa did to Anna. Things simply did not occur to her the same way as they did to Anna. Now it is only crucial that they communicate it out with each other :) And I am sure they will manage it because they genuinely love each other like only sisters can!
So, a great chapter as always! Please, ignore reviews that are nothing else but rude — some people can be so cruel. I really do not understand it because if I do not like a story, then I do not read it — well, some people obviously do not know about this option just yet. But do not let your day be ruined by them!
Also, it is so kind of you that you reply to the reviews that try to be not (at least completely) rude. Have a nice day and I can’t wait to read more of your story!

This chapter was painful, but it works as a sign of how good of a writer you are! I look forward for the next chapters, and I really hope you're doing good physically, mentally and emotionally.
Great job and stay safe!

Seems like you deleted all those guest reviews.

I was borned enough to look into my update list and go over this fic again and its funny because this whole thing REEKS about author issues being projected.

Did your parent like your big sister more?

This chapter did satisfy me, a lot! Yes, it hurts to see the relationship between Anna and Elsa be shattered, but frankly, they need that to truly become closer. Also, I like how you pointed out that Elsa's manner of protecting Anna at the shipwreck scene, in fact, was dangerous to her, besides being emotionally callous.
Amazing chapter, probably one of my favorites!

That was a great chapter! I liked how Anna finially tells Elsa how she is feeling. In both movies she didn't tell Elsa how her pushing Anna away makes her feel. She forgives her way to easy. I think Elsa can't even imagine how Anna had been feeling

this felt like a stab wound right in my heart. so painful oh god. what's going oooooonnnnnn

This is how Anna should have reacted in the movie. She took things too easy for my liking although I enjoy the movie. Cried happy tears was glad Olaf returned, and accepted her sister staying in the forest. Never addressing the issues that caused their argument. Again this is totally more believable. Will Olaf return? Update soon .