Can’t wait for the next chapter to be out!

Soccer but this review probably won't change anything:(

Hey! Thanks a lot for taking my advice and one minor thing is that it would just be losing ’re story’s awesome keep writing!

I love your story please keep it up and add in a twist it alwys makes it exicting.
I am coping in the coronavirus okay

Definetly netball.

I would have to say soccer I am big fan and play myself.I would recommend that you put Tris as a Mid because she is fast and you can still have her score more often then she would as a she has to have good stamina so you should say that she also does Cross your story is really great keep writing!

i think tris should do soccer.

Nice story! I like itI think Tris should do soccer or track.

This is amazing! You are a great writer!

I am so so so sorry I didn't mean to be rude or offend you as I said in my authors note I changed it and if I offend anyone in the future let me know and I will fix it. Sorry.

This story would be good if you didn’t just call girls who wear a lot of makeup, slutty. That’s super rude and not true at all, just because a girl likes to put some effort into her appearance doesn’t mean she’s a “slut”. That’s demeaning as fuck.

great chapter i think your doing pretty good!

I have a lot more time on my hands being in isolation so I think that l will be updating every Monday, Thursday, and Saturday maybe more but I will try to stick to that schedule as much as possible. Thanks for reading my story it means a lot.

great chapter just a question idk if you already said it or not but are you going to have an updating schedule or is it just going to be whenever you have a chapter ready but great work!

Love the first chapter! Keep going whenever you have time! You're amazing at writing!