Reviews for Hell's Ultimate Prisoner
JCM chapter 26 . 9/27
I’m new to reading Lucife fan fiction so I’ve just read this story start from chapter 1 - 26, it’s an interesting version of events you have put together though I did have few comments/queries that maybe you could answer or put into the story.
1) why/how did Chloe get wings, true getting into hell was an achievement but that does not explain why.
2) when talking to God why did Chloe not ask about this and if she is now really an angle and does that mean that she can effectively freely visit heaven or hell?
3) is Chloe now immortal and if so what is her power (Lucifer has his mojo, Amenadiel can stop/slow down time) so what’s her power?
4) how come we have not had a proper conversation between Maze, Linda and Ella about her change of status.
5) has Chloe learned to fly?

Really enjoying your story so please update soon.
SPCLjmm chapter 24 . 9/10
Looking forward to more of the storyparticularly Lucifer’s return to earth n familyincluding Chloe n Trixie
SPCLjmm chapter 23 . 9/10
Incredible chaptergreat conversations. Looking forward to the remaining conversation.
Kaijucifer chapter 19 . 8/12
This is getting better and better I swear.
JayeMaru chapter 19 . 8/6
I could feel the adrenaline in these two recent chapters, and imagine the action. I also empathized with Janson’s confusion. The celestial gang certainly does things their own way, at their own pace. :)
JayeMaru chapter 17 . 8/6
Uh oh, Dan has really gone rogue! He’ll be surprised, I think, when newly-powered Chloe finally tracks him down...! Looking forward to what happens next.
justjoe chapter 17 . 8/5
This was well written, as usual. However, I'm going to move on. I didn't like the Chloe wing thing and Lucifer punking out was too S2-S3 for my tastes. I disliked it then and I dislike that here.

Best of luck with the remaining of the story.
Kaijucifer chapter 16 . 7/29
Loving it. Though Dan is gonna be in for a ride awakening.
justjoe chapter 16 . 7/21
Wow! There is a lot going on here. Dan's decent has been truly epic. I see some real possibilities for Chloe here. I'm very interested in seeing where you take her.

Again, I'm really enjoying the ensemble castand the general plot development. Well done!
SPCLjmm chapter 16 . 7/20
Interesting twists n turns
SPCLjmm chapter 8 . 7/19
What an awesome close to this chapter!
cmtaylor531 chapter 15 . 7/9
Dan is losing it.
JayeMaru chapter 14 . 7/5
Great updates. I’m looking forward to Amenadiel’s reaction. :)
justjoe chapter 14 . 7/4
I'm really liking the team dynamic here with Team Lucifer! Each has their own strengths and perspectives. Not a lot happened in this chapter but you were still successful in moving the plot along.

Well done.
Kaijucifer chapter 14 . 7/4
It's picking up now!
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