| Reviews for In The Shade Of Truth |
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   Larry Holmes chapter 3 . 7/21 Brilliant...absolutely superb! Thanks. |
| bponder chapter 3 . 7/20 hope there is a next time soon |
| Jbug47 chapter 3 . 7/20 The Bad Old Dragon is gone finally. Kate proved how tough she really was. Rick kept her going even when he wasn’t there. A true Caskett story! Loved it! |
| Manxkid chapter 3 . 7/20 A great story- thanks for writing it and I look forward to your next one. |
| life's a mystery chapter 3 . 7/20 great story :) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/29 This is great, please continue it! |
| Sandy0401 chapter 2 . 6/12 Amazing update, I love the Veritas/Belly of the Beast twist on this. I do think that was a bit on the slower part of the team and Rick though to not automatically assume Bracken but at the same time they're just so worried it probably slipped there mind. I hope they can rescue Kate soon. |
| BKeh chapter 2 . 6/11 Great story line. |
| FDWojo chapter 1 . 6/11 Since your summary doesn't say anything about "Character Death", you should be aware that everyone is expecting Kate to survive... Frank |
| FDWojo chapter 2 . 6/11 I find your story interesting. You're using all the normal methods to extend and delay the reader from knowing what happens until the last moment, and that makes for a compelling story. I applaud you for not having Rick be stupid and hiding the text message from the boys. But, I do have two problems. 1) I cannot bring myself to believe that nobody would even think that the reason Kate was taken was because of Bracken. That has been her main focus for the entire series, and despite changing a very few things around in the story, Castle would absolutely keep Bracken in mind as the cause. On a side note, I find it confusing that once they got they tape from Kate and had listened to it, they hadn't even tried to arrest Bracken yet. Despite how you might have change bits around in the series, Bracken's level of criminality would have REQUIRED the police to pick him up. They wouldn't have waited for days. 2) I get the impression that you might not be a native English speaker, and that's okay. But you might want to consider getting someone to Beta read for you and help suggest grammar corrections in the story. Keep up the good work! Frank P.S. Why was she even walking home from work? They always drove home from the precinct or from wherever they were at. |
| Jbug47 chapter 2 . 6/10 This is a gruesome story with hopefully a pleasing end! Bracken needs to be stopped permanently! Hopefully soon! |
| life's a mystery chapter 2 . 6/10 great update :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/9 More, more, more pleeease |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/6 What A Lousy Ending Don’t Write No More If You Can’t Have A Good Ending |
| MonicaKateBingCastle chapter 1 . 5/11 Ooh fatastic start! Can't wait to read more! |
