"And so here he was, back in his old hometown, in a new job, with a rickety old bicycle and nothing to eat."

This line has an excellent vibe, it feels like the beginning of a grand adventure.

I might have stumbled on a gem with this story. I'm pretty hard to please when it comes to Elsa x OC fics but I'm already shipping her and Niklas super hard. The childhood sweetheart trope is a weakness of mine for sure. Also, your writing style is very neat; your narration seems to have a character that's separate from the characters in the story, which makes your whole story have that little extra bounce to it, like the readers are in on a secret with the author. Excited to read more!

Hahah poor Elsa, being young and beautiful she has so many men that wish to have her hand in marriage. She’ll find love someday. I know it!

Okay this was actually adorable! And so well written.

This was the chapter I didn’t know I needed.

“'I was afraid of the possibility of losing my sister.' She lifted her eyes to meet his. 'I asked you to move into the Castle so that Anna would never have to choose between us.'“

AND this was the reason I didn’t know I needed! Such a great chapter and now I’m dying for the next one!

That was some seriously impressive Elsa/Kristoff bonding. Extremely well written and fun to read. Disney really missed the boat by not including any of this kind of thing in Frozen 2.

I really enjoy reading chapters like this. So much detail and mood setting. The constant reminder of the single candle flickering, the warm atmosphere, the awkward points, the humbleness of Elsa just sharing her time with Kristoff. Both Characters just easing each other's stress about the very things they are worried about in life. The hug they shared which was a admission by Elsa as to how little she knows about relationships and things like that.

Ch:11 marks the point in history where Justice has finally been served for Kristoffs character using the original Frozen framework.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.

I loved the interaction between Elsa and Kristoff in this chapter. It's something we NEVER got to see in the movies. It adds something very special to their relationship as future in-laws. Don't even get me started on that subtle moment where Elsa was checking Kristoff out. XD It was worth the wait. Great job.

I love this fic so much, you have a beautiful way of writing this slow burn love story. The fluff in this chapter melts my heart, Niklas is so sweet and caring towards Elsa. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Holy this chapter was amazing. The build up was so much fun and the date was just so beautifully written. Your writing is such a treat I especially love your conversations between the sisters. Waiting for more!

Argh! Don't you just hate it when you're in a rush and people keep showing up to delay you. That was frustrating to read. Kristoff is really being overly protective of Elsa. Maybe she can say something to calm his nerves if they get to talking about Niklas.

This is a great story, so well written. Can't wait for more!

Loved the math puns that Elsa and Niklas were telling each other. It was sad to read the story about Niklas and the pig. I wonder if that was the incident behind Kai's attitude towards Niklas. If not, his father must have done something REALLY bad to get kicked out of the kingdom. Great chapter. Don't apologize. It was an amazing chapter.

I love seeing stories like this where we actually see Elsa show interest for a man. In the movies, she's a neutral kind of figure which is why everyone is questioning her sexuality. I really whish we got to see something like this in the movies. Elsa should have someone too. She deserves to feel that kind of love too. Great work. Excited for future updates! Keep up the great work!

The school teacher dies every time Elsa looks at him and I die every time you update! The tension you’re building is crazy good!

So far, I am really enjoying your story. You write with great detail and you have a clear understanding of the characters. Setting up a potential romance for Elsa was fun to read. Keep up the good work.

Great story, i love how you write the little moments.