The poogie notes were funny, ha.
Nice descriptive language throughout.

I noticed the formatting (periods, etc.) was a little inconsistent in the notes section. Not sure if that was deliberate because it’s a hunter’s notes, or typos.

Some of the paragraphs are rather large, I would suggest breaking them up. It’s easier to read and keep your place.

Some of the scene transitions felt a little… Sudden? Could use those line separator things, or figure out a way to narrate the transition more smoothly.

Despite that, good stuff, keep it up.
Guessing your an old MHF2/MHFU player? I forgot how stuff with Felyne used to work back then.

Interesting story, I can't wait to hear more! We need more stories about the life of hunters on here!