Reviews for Remnants of the Worlds |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 1). Glad we started with eri, as well as many scenes with her 2). There is no such thing as half-Faunus, you either are or are not 3). Plz continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting idea having Naruto, Natsu, Izuku and Shiro and their respective allies in the RWBY-verse but you may have too many characters now to focus on, probably could would have been easier to only brought Naruto, Natsu, Izuku, Eri and one more finish up the team, that way it would be much easier to focus on each character |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far. Looking forward to the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice first chapters but pairings id like to see is naruto/Pyrrha, izuku/ruby and natsu/Weiss. I haven’t watched fate stay night to know about his character |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent, you should add'Full metal alchemist' too. |
![]() ![]() Awesome. If Naruto is 17 then that means he is after the war. The Pairing naruto x ruby |
![]() ![]() ![]() Booo, this is bad. You're too much of a novice to write good multi crossover. Start with easy mode first bro. Do a regular crossover and get a beta reader. |
![]() ![]() I like this chapter, though your grammar needs some work. Also does naruto have access to any of the KCM modes? Other than that good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, i will wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm interesting, at what point are talking here? My guesses are : Naruto - just after pain Izuku - after he caught overhaul Natsu - don’t have enough info Shirou - after grail war as usual |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is no such thing as a "Half" faunus. You either are or aren't. If you got animal parts, you're a faunus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanksfor the chapter the grammar needs a little bit improving and would've liked to see shirou fighting too hope you keep the power balance between the four characters right please update again would like to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Grammar bro. You need a beta reader or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. I don't really get why Naruto would leave the fight with ajeel. Dude is way weaker than him in any form that involves kurama. Even more of a stomp if it's six paths Naruto. |