Reviews for Meishu
D4rkpunch chapter 4 . 7/22
This 'fight scene" was badly written... The problem isn't even the cliché of "awaken the dormant power within him through being beaten," It was so fast, confusing and short that I didn't even paid attention the name of who was attacking Naruto that I just put in my head: mini-villain 1 is the psychopath who will show up and disappear 'cause he already served his purpose.
walawelehu chapter 4 . 7/1
I'm waiting for the continuation of this chaptee.
K1B4ND chapter 4 . 6/9
Yeah... No, the fight part is badly done.
ninjafanhein chapter 4 . 6/8
please update
Master One chapter 4 . 5/28
though this story remind me of KGF
Master One chapter 1 . 5/28
good story
CandyMaster chapter 4 . 5/27
love this story! add minami too to the pairing if you don't mind huehueheu. also what happen to Rias and friends?
AzureSoulReaper chapter 4 . 5/25
interesting story
M2R chapter 4 . 5/20
interesting, hope those kids die, hahaha, who cares since they are already cruel and hope the teacher die too

nicer anyway
Narutouchiha chapter 2 . 5/20
You are a fellow Indian Brother..
Because This Fanfic is the exact copy of The indian Movie KGF...
Crimsonwheel chapter 4 . 5/15
Nice. can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/15
Amazing chapter! I'm glad you also gave him the chakra of Ashura. Now he will be balanced with hate and love. I can't tell you how happy I'm after reading a story with a decent Naruto. He is perfect in this story. Neither retarded nor emo. Just perfect.

Also, I'm glad you decided to keep Minami alive as it will save this story from evolving into a cliche tale. It will be nice to see Minami witness everything with her own eyes. Her son's accomplishments will surely make her proud.

As for Miya, can you please add her with Naruto. She will look really nice with him. Her kind and forgiving nature will balance the ruthless ruling nature of Naruto.
Darck Master chapter 4 . 5/14
(?)...
WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 4 . 5/14
Please continue
Can’t wait for more
ThePhenakism chapter 4 . 5/14
Awesome chapter !
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