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I honestly liked all of them! They're each such compelling characters! I think Celine will make it pretty far, she's mentally tough,very resourceful and know what she needs to do to get out of there and seems like shes even willing to get her hands a little dirty to do so. Talia has an interesting backstory and she seems strong and fierce and wants to earn a victory from her own effforts and nothing more. Honestly i think her father paying off the head gamemaker will lead to some severe consequences, there even seemed to be some foreshadowing of it so i guess we'll just have to see how that plays out. Isadora is strong,confident and seems very kind with a healthy relationship with her family and friends that will help guide her to a victory. I expect her to make it real far if not win. Amazing chapter though! Hope to see an update soon cause I'm hooked!

The district 3 escort was my favorite too lazy to go back and see their name lol. I liked Avery from district 10, seems like she'll be a little fighter but I'm excited to learn more about all of these tributes. I'm looking foward to learning more about Isadora, and the careers in general, gonna start reading the next chapter right away!

It was nice to get a glimpse at half the tributes. I know we don't know much about them yet but they all seem pretty interesting so far! I wanna get to know Darby more. Found it pretty funny how he tried biting a peacekeeper through their suit and he's the mayor's nephew, that's pretty interesting. I liked all of them so far those. Isadora seem like great victor material. She seems strong,level headed,confident and relatable. The careers in general seem very strong this year though. Can't wait to see them interacting with each other and showcasing their skills. Seraphine was pretty much what i expected a captiol citizen to be like especially one of high power, i won't mind seeing her again though. She had a pretty interesting perspective

My favourite tribute so far is Talia. At first, I thought she was the typical spoiled girl from District 1, but she surprised me, eventually. I like her determination and the fact that she wants to suceed with her own forces

Wow I'm so excited for this arena, i know you got so many neat tricks up your sleeve and can't wait to see you execute it! You also seem to be foreshadowing certain events and I'm really intrigued to see how this is all going to unfold. I'm fully buckled in for the ride!

Wow this was really powerful and emotional. I was really starting to like Cathair but he knew regardless, he was bounded by the chains of the filthy captiol and that he'd never be free and that he'd always be their pawn, and this was the only way he can set his chains free. I enjoyed his interactions with the head gamemaker though. It's very interesting seeing things in the gamemaker's perspective. Really do love your writing style though. Everything is just so detailed and you really take your time to flesh out characters even if they're not going to be a pivotal part of the story. Awesome chapter though! I'm so excited for this story!

honestly, i liked every tribute shown in this chapter :)

talia's relationship with her family is very interesting and virgil's background is super compelling, he might be one of my favorites so far. isadora also seems nice enough so far as well so i don't really have a least favorite as of right now

also love the way you wrote celine :) your writing is descriptive and nice to read, i love it. can't wait to read more !

mine: celine, remus
love:
like: virgil
neutral / undecided: talia, isadora
dislike:
hate:

Wow, I hate to say it but Virgil is totally my favorite. He's super intriguing and I can totally see some brilliant character development happening there. Can't say I have a least favorite, I really do find them all interesting. I can see Celine going pretty far, for a non-career. She seems like someone who would have good observation skills and stamina- which are super important in the games. Honestly, I quite enjoyed each one of these characters. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Alright time to get all caught up! This was an awesome opening and a great way to grip the audience. I loved your use of imagery, i as able to envison things so perfectly with how much detail and depth you put into everything. I really also loved how you described the psychological toll the arena takes on you even for a career. I was honestly expecting Taffeta to pull off an upset, but it was still pretty amazing how she managed to get that far none the less. Hope we get to see more of Cathair. He seems like a relatable character and it'll be interesting to see things in his perspective. Anyways awesome chapter and I'm so excited to read more!

Oh, this was a great chapter! Renard seems like an interesting young one to learn about, can't wait to see more of him! So does Magnus- the kind ones always hurt my heart to see reaped. My favorite escort was probably Reyna, as she seems very intriguing. I'm pretty excited to see how you write Nihal, to be honest. I don't expect him to go too terribly far, but I am excited to hear more about him before the games.

I like the way you presented Renard, thank you for accepting him :)

this was a great chapter ! i love your take on reapings, it's very unique and fun to read from seraphine's view. it's hard to say who could be a potential victor just from these first short snippets of 1-6 but we'll wait and see. this was overall a v good and interesting read:)

Well, one cannot deduce that much about tributes from this chapter, but I liked the way you described these Reapings, especially the overall descriptions of the districts. As for the tributes, One, Two, and Four were volunteers, nothing unexpected. Honestly, I'm more interested in Zimri than in Careers

great chapter - loved your writing! i want to see more of caspian but that's just me being biased because he's isadora's district partner lmao. district five seems like it'll be fun, astoria's blankness combined with darby's more spirited nature will be an interesting read, can't wait to see how they interact. sidenote: astoria wells is such a beautiful name! also interesting to see the girls from one and two are related to victors, i think? straight off the bat talia isn't giving me vibes that she'll make it far, her family having to bribe the training centre doesn't exactly bode well - hope she proves me wrong!