NANI?! Wheatley is BACK?!

Probably should’ve paid more attention to details. Thanks for telling me that, and it is now fixed. Virgil sports arms now. Using his abilities, he created his own arms in a robotics lab. He’s just that smart.

I’ve got to admit it won’t be the only time I cast misfortune over everyone, just wait until I decide chaos is necessary.

Really appreciating your comments here, as it helps me when a little tweak is needed here and there. I encourage you to continue.

I’ll get started with chapter 5 as soon as possible and that is within this week. I’m going to measure the time and progress I can make in what I call “writing session” to have an idea of when the chapter will be released. It could also mean that updates could be more frequent.

Stay tuned, for we are going completely blind into the unknown. And I’m sure you do not want to miss this.

Farewell, says that XtraXP you get when completing missions and the XtraXP event has finished.

Nice story! Definitely an interesting premise.

Before I say anything, congrats for posting your story! Just posting that first chapter can be a daunting task... let's not even mention posting the other chapters.

I will admit, at times the wording is a bit awkward or off, but it's only every once in a while. I will also admit, I have a question, how does Virgil have tools? Can he control panels and some robotic arms? Just curious as to how that works.

I like how you write GLaDOS and I like the idea that she's a pretty slow test subject (and also that she's so hung up on that). And, well, Wheatley's back... GLaDOS is definitely going to be angry with him, considering it's his fault she had to reset everything. Let's see if he wreaks any more havoc.

Sorry for the long review. Anyways, the plot thickens! I am interested in seeing how everything else folds out. Good job on the story! See you soon!

Sup! It’s da XtraXP. I’d like to say that I plan to update this fanfic every two weeks, for I’m not sure if I can keep up doing it every week (at least for now). About repeating the lore of Portal, it’s because I wrote it with people in mind that know nothing of the games. Initially I didn’t even planned to post it. Besides, it’s helpful in case you or I forget any fact from Portal. Definitely not fillers. Nope.

Anyways, expect an update in 3 to 4 days. Heck, now I’m inspired. I’ll get back to writing. Hope it turns out great.

Your precious XtraXP, shutting down.

I like this story! It's cool to see how GLaDOS herself goes through tests. But why were you talking in the first two chapters like the readers weren't familiar with the events of Portal? I think that everyone reading this knows and likes Portal. One last thing. When are you going to write the next chapter? It would be great if you could set up a schedule, like doing this on one specific day every weekend.

hmmm interesting

PS: The ZeroPoint Manipulator does not use Magnetism

Hiya, and congrats on starting your first fic! Glad to have you in the fandom. If I were to make any suggestions for your work, I might suggest breaking up some of your paragraphs so that it's easier to read. Dense blocks of text can make it difficult for the reader to fully enjoy your writing, and it's a relatively easy fix, so I'd take advantage of it. It can add a lot more clarity and impact to your work.

As far as grammar and spelling go, I can't spot any major issues, so good job! Good grammar and spelling in a fic is sometimes rare but it's always appreciated. Some of your sentences feel a bit awkward, but I don't think they're incorrect grammar-wise. Great start!

Also, I'm writing this story in a way that if you

I'd like to take the first spot here to thank you all who decided to support me with comments and the fact that you took time to read this story. It means a lot.