Get rid of ysolda tamriel and mundus were destroyed and you stated the only reason your dragonborn survived was because of his immortal dragon soul so a vampire should never have survived in the first place. Also it just completely over complicates your story

Fus ro dah doesnt shoot out blasts of wind it shoots out blasts of kinetic force

Viserys is a self entitled dickweed douche nozzle who is batshit crazy and believes only he can be king hed never except jon and the moment he recieved the letter he would start throwing a temper tantrum denying it and talking about how hes the one true king

You have him choosing block which cant be used to its fullest potential with a 2 handed weapon so give him 1handed or get ris of block and give him 2handed

You need to make it 7 of the skill trees and give him stealth which will help him avoid fights like he wants and one handed since you chose block so hes got something to enhance his fighting power

The planet westeros and essos is on is called planetos

Oh? Interesting

Excellent Story! Mayhaps the best crossover between those two licences yet! I can't wait to read more and I love how the author scales the fight appropriately to make the reading extremely enjoyable!

Hmmm... wonder what could be familiar about Melisandre for Jon?

Not Bad

Interesting

Chuuni stuff badly written to boot, only to be read if you absolutely need your daily edgy rants in Dovahzul. But I commend the authors confidence in posting this story.

I think Dany and Jon need to figure out how to resolve his past and his present, given her vision at the end

This a unique story. And these days, that makes it singular. The fact it's so interesting and engaging, makes it a plus. Great chapter.

A magnificent story. I am looking forward to reading the continuation.