If she become a Bard have a Gacha Roll and it will say Random Stand and the Stand is Michael Jackson.

This a funny chapter

Rotary matchlock? is that a Revolver but a matchlock?

So... original trilogy with paradox elements? Because marcellus shouldn't be in the terrorist group in paradox.

Yes! We have the adorable umbrella tsukomogami in this story! Can't wait when she meets Ahria

Hang on was this fanfic using the original plot or the paradox version? Sorry I’m just dumb interpreting things

Maybe you could add the Crest from Fire Emblem Three Houses to the Gacha as blood vials that when consumed give the person the Crest that resides within that blood. Maybe you could even add the Relics.

Yes child, embrace your inner thief!

In all seriousness though, I like how this chapter went. Can't wait for the next!

Yes child, embrace your inner thief!

In all seriousness though, I like how this chapter went. Can't wait for the next!

When in the timeline of MGQ is this fic currently? Considering Alice isn't with Luka I assume that means this takes place prior to the game, but by how many years?

Well done with the chapter. By the way you don’t have to force yourself to create the Umbra character, it was only a suggestion. You don’t have to try and please everyone, always write how you would enjoy it.

An interesting twist to things. Not even sleep is safe, well done with the chapter and thanks for including my suggestion.

That said what would you think about having a character that is similar to Umbra from warframe? They could be a failed chimera that promestein created and might hunt or protect Ahria. The thought of a character that lost their mind but still has so much willpower to resist being controlled is quite appealing to me.

Is that umbrella Kogasa? Are we going to have touhou in here? Cause I'm excited for that!

Yao gives me the creeps.

I like it.

bow or crossbow for gacha