Well this has to be one of the nicer and more wholesome explanations between what happened with Professor Ivy and Brock i have seen, good job over all, i am a little surprised that Professor Ivy isn't used that much but maybe its because people didn't like the Orange Island arc or something like that.

By the way how would i send you a challenge? You see i have a idea for a one shot you might like, it stairs Naruto and Erika in a retelling of a old ghost story called "The Peony Lantern".

This is well written man. You did great on how you written the characters in the fic.

You should do one more chapter. It'll be nice to know what happened in the years that follow. Not only this story but your other One-shots as well. I would love to see an epilogue of your Oleana story to see Naruto when he's grown up and what happened to him.

Loved it, excellently done one shot! Brock is unworthy of her!

I’ll like to see a chapter of their wedding and some more flashbacks of how they met

Good chapter and very good one shot

It's a refreshing oneshot to see with a different type of scenario and pairing. Title is a little tough but still quite good. Could be a little bit more eye catching or in a way that catches potential reader attention. Otherwise, great! ;)

I thought Naruto gonna punch Brock hehehe, it's good thankyou

Me gustó mucho este one-shot, aunque me hubiera gustado ver una escena donde naruto sorprende a Ivy cuando aún el equipo de Ash se encontraba.

I enjoyed this more than I thought I would.