Reviews for Damocles
Black Panther chapter 3 . 5/4
Is the person helping sin and Aidan a good guy or bad guy?
Red-X chapter 3 . 5/1
This was a great chapter, Is Aidan going to take Roy's place in saving Thea from those thugs also is Aidan going to put the skull on his mask down the line and finally are you going to all the seasons with Aiden in it and will he be a big part with all the main villains like Slade Wilson Damien dark RAS al ghul Adrian chase Cadan James those are just my thoughts again great chapter
Dr1zzy chapter 3 . 4/30
Thx for the update
Panther-10 chapter 3 . 4/30
This was a great chapter amazing job are you paring your O-C with Thea?
Darlok chapter 3 . 4/30
Well done! It definitely felt more fleshed out. The fight scenes felt a lot better. Seemed to flow a lot better and with throwing knives and the flash bang, he doesn't seem to be as limited. The lack of skull mask is certainly a perfect call at this point. I am liking that he is more prepared this time when before he seemed to be more like a well trained brawler. Feels a lot like a batman or nightwing sense when it comes to the mystery. I hope perhaps we'll learn more about the man behind the mask more going forward soon. I am curious about the possible changes there as well and the backstory. Also yeah good call in beginning this in the season one. Gives Oliver a real partner to help out and get to know before the others get into the field next season and a chance for both to learn about the other and get along better. This could also help if you have Maddox and Thea getting closer to avoid the whole relationship debacle later with her brother's sidekick. Also one thing that has carried over from the original. I really hope to one day see them figure out which hideout was the better one and their reactions about the other in comparison. I definitely like the ancient ruins over the factory myself. Keep up the great work and looking forward to what comes next.
Jason Hunter chapter 2 . 4/25
Great chapter so who does your O-C look like?
beenjammin0421 chapter 2 . 4/25
Very interesting. Decided to start in season one instead of season two. First two chapters were good but I can't really say anything else apart from that. Grammar was good. I Hope the next chapter comes out soon
Darlok chapter 2 . 4/25
Great official start in this new setup. Leaving the mystery of his helping Thea when she learns from others about the guy that saved her will be a mystery she will not leave unsolved which should bring her into his world soon I hope. Plus I imagine Oliver will be doing his own investigation. It does seem more in depth and not seemingly as rushed such as Sara's involvement. Kinda had some doubt her training could have been so effective as quick as it was implied. Still, I can't help but be intrigued more. Looking forward to start playing out from this point and expanding Maddox's story. Keep up the great work and while I'm glad to see this story moving again after so I long I hope you avoid burning yourself out.
Darlok chapter 1 . 4/25
Loved the original. Not a bad start but not enough yet for me to tell if this one will turn out better. I kinda like the lack of the skull mask from the last one. Feels like the daredevil vibe from Netflix. Interested in how this goes from here so I hope more updates come soon.