Reviews for Therapy Session |
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derekctomlinson chapter 8 . 7/28 looking forward to the next chapter of therapy session and your future stories |
derekctomlinson chapter 7 . 7/2 videl smirking at her boyfriend gohan relax and play with your box |
derekctomlinson chapter 7 . 6/8 aww can't wait for your new chapters |
derekctomlinson chapter 6 . 5/10 chichi smirking at her husband goku i think we should bring gohan and videl here to therapy |
BC chapter 3 . 5/9 Very interesting premise with the characters dealing with their emotions in plain view. The spacing added in Ch.3 is definitely useful, thanks for adding that. A few tiny spelling errors here and there, but they don't detract too much from the story. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one. |
derekctomlinson chapter 3 . 5/8 gohan saying to his girlfriend videl hey you are a part of my family |
derekctomlinson chapter 2 . 4/30 mhmm my ass videl hissing at her boyfriend i bet piccolo made you feel very safe |
o- Nyx -o chapter 1 . 4/26 The ending of this chapter surprised me. I wonder what you have planned next? Also apologies, but I did find the writing a tiny bit choppy to read. I think spacing the dialogue when a different character speaks could help you. Keep up the good work! |
derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 4/24 lol clang after clang could be heard in the waiting room of the therapy office with a few lumps on his head gohan trying to escape from his wife videl who is hissing at her husband i see that i am not an important member of this family to go to therapy |