I would be swearing up a storm if I wasn't currently siting a lecture...Do you know how hard it it to stop yourself from crying around other people? How hard it is to keep yourself from screaming profanities as I read through this?

Cause I'll be damned.

Your stories elicit such primal reactions in me that I-

Oh dear lord...I need to be stopped.

feels like this need's a second chapter or sequel but I suppose things don't always have a happy ending.

Great short story. I really enjoyed the progression between the two. The ending was sad but perfect. Thanks for writing.

im gonna say it, this pissed me off, here's the thing, i dont like how she even let him kiss her, i mean wtf he was one of the reasons why she wasn't there when her grandfather died, he might not have been the one who broke her phone, but all the events that led to someone breaking kagomes phone is due to HIS bullying, everything is all his fault, hell he didn't even do anything to stop the student body from bullying her, not doing a thing to stop bullying is just the same as bullying someone. god i hate it, i enjoyed this story at first but then it just deteriorated at the end. kinda disappointing

Not much to say other than I enjoyed this very much! X3

Wow I wish there was an epilogue for this. Like how Kyoya found her again and maybe just maybe they can be together...

It was really good! I really really liked it! Thank you for sharing your writing and ideas with us!

Why you gotta do this to meeeeeeeee ;-; my heart huhuhuh but also kyoya whyyyyy damn uuuuu TTTT you should've just said yes! now i cri

This was so very touching. Glad you shared it with us :)

Ah but Kyoya lied there at the end didn't he?

Omg
Kyoya, you stupid boy
Could have married the most powerful priestess yet ended up denying her
God I hope this has a epilogue
It deserves one

Well that was a heart wrenching bit of a ride... such an ending... I really wonder if they ever meet up again

I liked it, but I expected a bitter ending... Kagome would forgive him, but she’d not trust him. Therefore, there would be nothing between them.

I kind of expected one of the rich bints to hire some dangerous guys to attack Kagome in broad daylight and on school grounds. Better it, one of the rich students would point a loaded gun at Kagome, try to scare her. It’s end up with the person getting angry and shooting her in the arm and abdomen... she’d be fine after some weeks in a coma.

Maybe she’d find love with someone and move from the school and it’s toxic environment. Kyoya would feel horrible and secretly heartbroken because he never forgot Kagome... she’d move on, get better, make a career... maybe she’d find a reincarnated Sesshomaru and love him till the rest of his days.

I think what bothered me most in this story was the absurd amount of abuse infringed on Kagome and the lack of consequences for the people involved, especially the person who started it all: Kyoya. He got away Scott free, didn’t apologize and even got the girl he helped abuse...

I don’t know... sounded like he was being rewarded in the end after such a horrible and deplorable behavior. I honestly didn’t agree with his happy ending. What did he actually do to atone? Seriously, atonement would have been a good option, showing him maturing and trying to help stop the shit he started... but he didn’t. Most of the time he observed, felt guilty but did nothing.

AGH this was so good! one thing that a lot of these stroies never focus on is that. yeah, there are genuine consequences for these outlandish types of behaviors. i really felt kagome's pain, having missed my abuelito's passing a few years back... i would have never forgiven some silly rich boy who took that from me to be honest. the crack in the jaw she gave kyoya was well earned!
great story like always, i might write a one shot sometime soon too, your stuff is always a breath of fresh air

Well I wasn't expecting this angst-filled masterpiece today, so thank you thank you thank you. As much as I love VVA, I don't mind a little abstinence if things like this come as a side effect. So, beyond loved this and I look forward to reading even more of what you're cooking up with VVA and otherwise!