This is a great fic so far! I love the irony that both of them are in fact British, but both of them think the other is Japanese. I can't wait for them to meet finally, and I wonder if Harry will have any influence on the Kira case? I'll be waiting for your next update!

Originally, the premise seemed ridiculous (and it still is, really), but this is actually one of the cutest fics I've ever read. And a cute death note fic? Thanks for giving me a new drug to overdose on.

This honestly seems like a really fun fanfiction so far and I'm interested to see where it goes. Good job and Keep up the good work.

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I love this story but your Japanese doesn’t make sense in most parts in the first chapter, so I always replace it with my own Japanese lines in my mind to make sense. Still l love how Harry is the new Kaito Kid, Wait is he the first Kaito Kid making Harry, Kuroba Toichi? If that’s so, that would be awesome! Then their child would be Kuroba Kaito! It would totally make sense if their child be Kaito since Kaito has an IQ of 400 and a magician thief!

I enjoyed this very much, especially hoy the soulmate thing works in relation to how a person is impacted by those words.

This is such an intriguing story, have to admit I never thought of these characters together. And yeah, only a mystery criminal would catch L's attention

Well this is adorable.

Did you copy this from ryulabird on ao3? If you did, you should give credit where credit is due.

Lovely story. Can't wait for more.

It’s a really good story, I love it!

Huh, you pull off the reasoning of these events so it’s not unrealistic. I’m really liking Harry being happy with his friends. It’s a small thing but I’ve never read anything like that small interaction for him before and I appreciate it very much. Him having lots of partners in these capers is cool! Nice character interaction and I like that you include Padma and Pavarti. I’m also looking forward to L and Harry meeting because I’m curious on how they interact and affect each other, because in my opinion Harry seems happy right now unless you know, a little suppression and denial. Or he just doesn’t see how it can get better until he meets L.

Quick note: you spelled Pavarti as Pararti in one of the almost last paragraphs of this chapter, when she’s blushing after Harry pulls his persona line

Thanks for the chapter.

I loved this chapter; L’s excitement over the case was the cutest thing (and I can only imagine what it’ll be like when he falls down the magical world rabbit hole).
And Harry! Out there, living his life! That’s our boy!

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