Your Snape is a selfish, hateful, self important loathsome man. This Snape doesn’t seem to have the capacity to look beyond his own needs and I find it hard to believe he would ask Voldemort to spare Lily much less turn against him.

His refusal to call Ariel by her name instead referring to her as Lily-thing makes me want to punch him every time he says it. He’s taking away her humanity and relegating her simply to Lily’s leftovers.

I'm glad Ariel is fighting back as much as she is able. She deserves answers not head games from Snape and Dumbledore.

I’m hooked on this story. Looking forward to your next chapter.

Lovvvvve thissssss!

Really enjoying your story, thanks for the update!

I really love where this is going! You are an amazinggggg writer, this idea is so creative! Ahhh so excited for the big reveal!

I love this so much! I love how long and detailed your chapters are. You do a great job with the plot and the characters. I cannot wait until another chapter is published!

well that was one way to get his attention!

Complimenti, spero davvero che Severus possa ricevere la lettera.
Come mai il professore ne parla a Silente?
Silente sa centrava qualcosa con Lily che non ha perdonato Severus?

Omg I loved it! I really can’t wait till the big reveal! I’m so happy u r back! Thanks for posting!

Very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next

can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work.

Damn cliffhangers, great as always

This is a really good confrontation between Sev and Ariel. Nice touch that the letter has changed. Can certainly see her earning more detentions to talk to Sev.

Wow! This chapter was amazing! Can't wait for the next one!

I hope you're safe considering the current situation. I really like this chapter and the relationship you are developing between ariel and snape.

So Ariel and Hermione know but poor obligated Severus is in the dark. Likely hood of him believing a letter without a memory...So what did Lily plan for him?