This is such a good one-shot that I feel like there should be a sequel just to see like the other's perspective during the journey such as Ruby's perspective of seeing Jaune and how he's coping as well as Ren and Nora's perspective. would love to see the perspective of the the WBY on Jaune but most of all would love to see their reaction towards the end with Jaune having Prism. would also love to see Jaune and Neon;s interactions when they meet again and how they are with Prism.

all in all, beautiful chapter. Looking forward for more, take care and keep it up.

this is cute. I like this.

This was REALLY good. I know you put this story as complete, but I think you should make a second chapter with the reactions of the rest of the group.

I will throw money at this if that will get it another part

Cute

That was some heartwarming shit

This was rather sweet to read. And I'm laughing at the multitude of reactions from everyone around them.

This right here is why you got to love uncommon or rare ships being done. Its just awesome to see something so rare be beautifully done. Excellent work my man!

This so so freaking cute, can we ever get a part two? Seriously, it's so sweet and perfect

Liked the story as:
A) the hookup was a very Jaune thing to occur. Pretty girl comes up to him, makes her intentions clear. They both had a tad too much to drink and Arc fecundity strikes again.

B) think that if Pyrrha had survived. Well, disappointed she wasn't his first, but determined to be his last.

Been one hell of a stepmom, treated Neon as a close friend if not sister, but her competitiveness would've demanded Jaune give them a kid too. World saving can wait. She wants one of her own damnit. Heh.

C) You missed an opportunity with the name of Neon's mom. Cee (sounds like Sea, so there's your colour association) Lin Katt would've been funnier. ;-P

D) This one shot would've had a massive butterfly wing flap effect on the Atlas Arc, no pun intended. So you're kinda blue balling us by keeping this a one shot. ;-P

E) the pairing might cheer up Blake as well. Another sign of human-faunus coexistence.

Need more

This was wonderful, good job man I loved it I'm tearing up a little lol.

Ok i didnt see that coming but this was really sweet. PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS! ITS TOO SWEET TO END AS A ONE SHOT!

Ya know it’s kinda sad this is a one shot

Sweet