Noooo this cant be all! I love this continuation of the story!

I had a gaming addiction for about 15 years where I played a couple RPGs for upwards of 14 hours a day. I’m loving this story and can’t wait to read more!

Frindy

thanks for finally using the gamer interface

thanks but plzz continue

Not to sound rude, since I absolutely love your story, but I thought you said you would update frequently? I can hardly wait for the next chapter of "malicious magical Malfoy".

this chapter feels like you didn't put a fraction of the effort into thinking it through as the original author. it's riddled with common cliches and tropes that drag down what was a more original work. i wound up speed reading half of it hoping it was going to improve after you just snaped character progression into smithereens when you decided the MC can learn anything without limit by reading it. meaning there is no reason the MC can't have master level skills going into Hogwarts. which would be boring. a protagonist is as interesting as the challenges they must overcome, and i don't expect your writing to produce real challenges after this chapter. this was a let down.

the book vaninshing after use use something i always found moronic and ill considered in Gamer fics. for a standard book to disappear there might not be consequences, but what about later when the MC is working on rare and unique books? i would expect that the Family Library has tombs that are perhaps the only remaining copy. is he just going to destroy the book for his own use making it impossible for future generations of his own children to use? is he going to absorb every single book in the library so there isn't a library anymore? then what's the point of the fidelious charm if there won't be any books that matter by the time he's done?
this plot device is something that has never been anything less than stupid in my mind. it would behoove you to consider changing it to something along the lines of a book having a feeling of power when picked up, perhaps a slight non-physical hum, and when absorbed, the book becomes inert. as i recall, reding a skill book in skyrim just upped the skill without eating the book. you could drop, sell, or just pop the book on a shelf after use. this makes more sense than writing your character destroying his family's generations of painstakingly built collection in his single lifetime and robbing his children of that knowledge.

it's alright. a lot different though, would of felt a more lighter gamer touch if at all would be better though.

way to ruin the story. good job

it is very good! can't wait for next update u.u

Eh.
I feel like this got a fair bit more juvenile.
M,M,M was filled with a lot more of an air of mystery and vagueness, The Draco here acts more like a self conscious child or a peacock, always wanting to show off and prove themselves. I'm talking about the guitar thing and enchanting.

Gamer system, I dunno how to feel about that in my headcanon the ability Draco from MMM had was like a path to victory just a lot more vague and with the overall quality being more straight forward? Juvenile even as I've said? Yeah, while I'll continue to read this I'll miss the old story's charm.

Which is ironic since Gamer SIs with depraved/arrogant/showoff MCs is something I usually like as long as it isn't too nonsensical.

Anyways I'm just projecting my disappointment at a rather drastic change in a series I was very much invested in but overall this is still interesting and well written though my only gripes would be with the Classes and such.

Draco can use wandless and silent magic. Why is he a beginner? Also MMM Draco was confident and self assured, his grandfather knew of his personality and while his mother coddled him I don't see him as the type to be 'too intimidated to ask.'

So yeah I have some complaints but good shit so far.

glad this story is being continued, though I was expecting you to of added the original chapters before placing your own.

Still thank you for continuing this fanfic and good luck in what direction you take this in :)

Well guess either someone's jealous or they dislike how a pureblood is more comfortable with a muggleborn then the 'perfect' pureblood girl? maybe how Hermione was able to match their naturally 'superior' skill? Racism probably plays a 'small' part too

anyway I look forward to seeing how this goes

Very good Keep writing

awesome decision! pls continue this!

Awesome!

BlueLancer addressed everything that needs to be said.

I am in deep agreement with their review (except it was South Park not Family Guy). Consider starting a new fic inspired by Bor902 but not a continuation.