Very cute!

Jealous Tim is a mood! I LOVED it!

Loved it, please write more. Would love to see how the bet between Jackson and Lopez came about and her reaction to finding out she won the bet.

I think you did a great job! I agree, their personalities do need to be explored a little more in the show, but that’s also good for us writers because that allows us to be able to go in different directions with their characters in our stories. Lucy would definitely be the more understanding of the two, at least to start with. Keep writing Chenford, you’ve done awesome so far!